题目: I dream of doing what I like
With the growth of the age,the dreams of mine are always changed.When I was 8,I dreamt of becoming an English teacher,because I enjoyed learning the knowledge from my teachers and I wanted to teach more people.At the age of 13,I dreamt of being a famous designer,like Karl.Because I wanted everyone in the world can wear my clothes and say:WOW,I like it.But now,I am hard-working because of my favorite high school-GYYZ.I wanna be a student of there.And when I grow up,I will travel all over the world.That is my biggest wish.I will remain my footsteps where I go.And I really have a number of dreams to realize.
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文章大致内容是这样的:
我梦想着做我喜欢做的事情
随着年龄的增长,我的梦想也在不断的变化。在我八岁时,我想成为一名英语老师,因为我很喜欢从老师那里学习到英语知识,而且我想要教更多人英语。在十三岁的时候,我想成为一名著名的设计师,像卡尔一样。我想要全世界的人们都穿着我设计的衣服并且很喜爱它。但是现在呢,我很努力得学习因为我最喜欢的高中-贵阳一中,我想成为那里的一名学生在明年。未来,我会周游世界,我会在我所去过的地方留下脚印。而且,我还有很多梦想要去实现。
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