您好！由于楼上已经把大部分的都说了，我就说我知道的。
want..to get into
这句没有虽然，但是的关系。虽然父母想让他们的孩子上大学或者成为一个成功的人，但是孩子需要有闲余的时间去做他们喜欢的事。这个表达是不正确的。应该改为父母想让孩子。。。。，所以让他们忙于学习，但是孩子也需要空闲的时间。
In order to make their children to go into university or a successful person, parents let them busy in study. But children also need free time to do what they like追答
want..to get into
这句没有虽然，但是的关系。虽然父母想让他们的孩子上大学或者成为一个成功的人，但是孩子需要有闲余的时间去做他们喜欢的事。这个表达是不正确的。应该改为父母想让孩子。。。。，所以让他们忙于学习，但是孩子也需要空闲的时间。
In order to make their children to go into university or a successful person, parents let them busy in study. But children also need free time to do what they like追答
建议把now改为nowadays或者是at present
too many homeworks
我想快乐很重要，学习很重要，i后面还有一个很重要。这个表达有点不好。
now至busy改一下
nowadays, there are too many homeworks for children because their parents arrange them to have after-classes, they are so busy that,they have no time to do exercise. Though study is important, I think health and happiness are important too.或are more important.者可以改为你觉得健康和快乐更重要的那句
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第1个回答 2016-03-27
是disagree,不是diagree, to do what they like, important, 不是inportant, 最后一句disagree后面只能加to do或that从句追问
最后一句改成I disagree children to have after-school classes.可以吗？
追答改成I disagree that children have after-school classes.
追问好 谢谢啦
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