看下我的英语作文,有没有哪里有错,求告知,明天要上台展示

如题所述

Topic: Global warming is one of the most urgent environment issues these days
Nowadays with the economic development, global warming has become a serious
topic. It is harmful to us, so we must take effective measures to save our planet. First
we should use more renewable energy replacing burning fosil fuels. Second, we
should go to school on foot(我觉得这个建议可以改一改,毕竟一些学生的家离学校很远,建议只适合部分同学). We can also encourage our parents to walk, cycle or use
public transports instead of driving private cars. Third we should plant more trees.
Last but not the least, we should save energy.

In conclusion, we should protect our Earth and guard against the disaster together.
We should contribute and protect our home from a small start. Let's work hard!
(fighting只在韩文指加油,在英文不是)追问

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谢谢小仙女

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第1个回答  2016-10-17
我也不太懂英语
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