跪求英语翻译

Question

帮忙用英语翻译一段话，我英语太孬了，非常谢谢
翻译下面语句：

杰夫旅游回来后，给露西打了个电话，向她说说旅游的情况。电话里，杰夫和露西相互问好，杰夫在纽约待了7天，杰夫说：“旅游非常快乐”。露西问了杰夫去了哪些景点，和朋友做了些什么。杰夫喊上他的朋友鲍勃，因为鲍勃曾经独自去过一些城市。他们沿途经过了很多地方，很愉快，杰夫和他的朋友去了美丽的纽约中央公园。回来的时候杰夫和他的朋友开着车回来的，车开的很快，在昨天晚上回到了家。电话里，露西很欣慰杰夫安全的归来，杰夫说他现在感觉很累，然后就去睡觉了。
同志们我也会谷歌，雅虎翻译，怕不准啊，翻译的好，我还会加分的！
现在就提高悬赏了

Answer 1

杰夫旅游回来后，给露西打了个电话，向她说说旅游的情况。
After Jeff returned from his voyage, he called Lucy and briefed her about his journey.

电话里，杰夫和露西相互问好，杰夫在纽约待了7天，杰夫说：“旅游非常快乐”。
Over the phone, they greeted each other. And Jeff told Lucy that he had spent a wonderful week in New York City.
露西问了杰夫去了哪些景点，和朋友做了些什么。
Then Lucy asked Jeff where he had been and what he had done together with his friends.

杰夫喊上他的朋友鲍勃，因为鲍勃曾经独自去过一些城市。
Before he went to the United States, Jeff asked his friend Bob to go together because Bob had once been to some cities in the United States alone.

他们沿途经过了很多地方，很愉快，杰夫和他的朋友去了美丽的纽约中央公园。
On their way to the Central Park in New York, Jeff and his friends passed through many places and they had had a good time there.

回来的时候杰夫和他的朋友开着车回来的，车开的很快，在昨天晚上回到了家。
They drived back with such a high speed and they arrived home yesterday evening.
电话里，露西很欣慰杰夫安全的归来，杰夫说他现在感觉很累，然后就去睡觉了。
Lucy was very gratified by Jeff's arriving safely. Jeff told Lucy that he felt exhausted before he went to sleep.

纯手工翻译

Answer 2

Jeff tourist returned, to Lucy I called the phone with her to talk about tourism. The phone, Jeff and Lucy each other hello, Jeff spent seven days in New York, Jeff, said: "Travel is very happy." Lucy asked Jeff to go and what sights, and friends have done. Jeff shouted at his friend Bob, because Bob has been a number of cities alone. After a lot of places along the way they are very happy, Jeff and his friends went to the beauty of New York's Central Park. Come back when Jeff and his friend driving a car back, he drove very fast, in last night back home. The phone, Lucy is very pleased to secure the return of Jeff, Jeff, said he felt tired, and then went to bed.

Answer 3

Jeff travel back to Lucy phoned and told her about tourism. The telephone, Jeff and Lucy say hello to each other, Jeff spent seven days in New York, Jeff says: "travel very happy". Lucy: what to ask Jeff sights, and friends what has been done. Jeff shouted his friend Bob, because he once visited some city alone. Along the way they passed many places, very happy, Jeff and his friends went to a beautiful New York central park. Back when Jeff and his friend drove the car back quickly, and came home last night. The telephone, Lucy glad Jeff safe return, Jeff says he now feels very tired, then went to bed.

Answer 4

Jeff returns from a trip,he makes a phonecall to Lucy for talking about his trip. On the phone,Jeff and Lucy greet each other.Jeff has been in NewYork for seven days,he tells Lucy that the trip is very nice.
Lucy asks Jeff about where has he been and what has he done with friends.Jeff asked Bob to travel with him since Bob had been some cities alone.
They has been many beautiful places and been always happy.They has been to the beautiful NewYorkCentralPark.And they drove home fast,and they got home last night.
On the phone ,Lucy is very pleased to hear Jeff's
safe back.Jeff tells her that he is very tired .Then he goes to bed.

完全手工翻译的，其中有不少语法做了调整，因为原文的时间顺序有点乱。

Answer 5

Jeff trip to Lucy after a call to her talk about tourism.Phone, Jeff and Lucy mutual and said hello, Jeff in New York for 7 days, Jeff said ” “ tourism very happy.Lucy asked Jeff went to what attractions and friends did.Jeff shouted to his friend Bob, because Bob had to go over some of the city.Their passing a lot of places, a lot of fun, Jeff and his friends went to the beautiful New York's Central Park.Come back Jeff and his friend driving back, car soon, he returned home last night.Phone, Lucy glad that Jeff safe return, Jeff said he now feel very tired, and then went to bed.

Answer 6

杰夫旅游回来后，给露西打了个电话，向她说说旅游的情况。电话里，杰夫和露西相互问好，杰夫在纽约待了7天，杰夫说：“旅游非常快乐”。露西问了杰夫去了哪些景点，和朋友做了些什么。杰夫喊上他的朋友鲍勃，因为鲍勃曾经独自去过一些城市。他们沿途经过了很多地方，很愉快，杰夫和他的朋友去了美丽的纽约中央公园。回来的时候杰夫和他的朋友开着车回来的，车开的很快，在昨天晚上回到了家。电话里，露西很欣慰杰夫安全的归来，杰夫说他现在感觉很累，然后就去睡觉了。
Jeff tourist returned, to Lucy I called the phone with her to talk about tourism. The phone, Jeff and Lucy each other hello, Jeff spent seven days in New York, Jeff, said: "Travel is very happy." Lucy asked Jeff to go and what sights, and friends have done. Jeff shouted at his friend Bob, because Bob has been a number of cities alone. After a lot of places along the way they are very happy, Jeff and his friends went to the beauty of New York's Central Park. Come back when Jeff and his friend driving a car back, he drove very fast, in last night back home. The phone, Lucy is very pleased to secure the return of Jeff, Jeff, said he felt tired, and then went to bed.