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Question

我最喜欢的歌曲是由卡彭特演唱的《昨日重现》。（Yesterday Once More;Carpenters） My favourate song is the《Yesterday Once More》of Carpenters ________________________________________________________________ 当我听到这首歌时，我感到快乐放松。（feel happy and relaxed） When I heard this song.I was feeling happy and relaxed. _______________________________________________________________ 我喜欢这首歌是因为它能使我回想起我的快乐童年。(remind sb of sth.) I like this song,because it remind me of my happy childhood. ________________________________________________________________ 这首歌听起来多美啊！（How...） How beautiful the song sounds! ______________________________________________________________ 在过去的二十多年里，美国乡村音乐已经变得越来越受欢迎。(more and more) In the past twenty years,the Americal country music already become more and more popular.

Answer 1

我最喜欢的歌曲是由卡彭特演唱的《昨日重现》。（Yesterday Once More;Carpenters） My favourate song is the《Yesterday Once More》of Carpenters My favourite song is Yesterday Once More by Carpenters. (谁唱的歌曲用by) 当我听到这首歌时，我感到快乐放松。（feel happy and relaxed） When I heard this song.I was feeling happy and relaxed. When I listen to it, I am happy and relaxed. (给我感觉你是在说一个经常的现象，所以没有用过去时) 我喜欢这首歌是因为它能使我回想起我的快乐童年。(remind sb of sth.) I like this song,because it remind me of my happy childhood. I like the song because it reminds me of my happy childhood. (主谓保持一致） 这首歌听起来多美啊！（How...） How beautiful the song sounds! How beautiful the song is! （感觉用is 好些） 在过去的二十多年里，美国乡村音乐已经变得越来越受欢迎。(more and more) In the past twenty years,the Americal country music already become more and more popular. During the past over twenty years, American country music has become more and more popular. (一定要用现在完成时）

Answer 2

以下是我认为一些 必要 的修改。当然你也可以参考其他朋友的提议： My favour i te song is （删掉 the ） 《Yesterday Once More》of The Carpenters When I hear this song , I feel happy and relaxed. I like this song （一般没有逗号） because it reminds me of my happy childhood. How beautiful the song sounds! （正确） In the past twenty years, the America n country music has already become more and more popular.