有谁能帮我看看我的翻译对不,要专业点的呀,拜托了!

Question

Translate these sentences into English ,using the words and phrases in brackets.
1.除了去公圆以外，我的活动范围仅限于临近地区（ apart from;movement;neighbourhood)
Apart from going to the park,my activity of movement is neighbourhood
2.没有足够的证据很难作出结论（draw a conclusion )
without enough evidence ,it is difficult to draw a conclusion
3.这些科学的探询将有助于我们项目的成功（scientific enquiry ;contribute to )
these scientific enquiry will contribute our program to success
4.居斯夫特埃非尔对他修建铁塔的计划满怀热情，而这座塔使他闻名于世（enthusiastic;construct )
Gustave Eiffel is enthusiastic about his plan that construct towel ,this towel make him well known.
5.他常提出些不同寻常的计划。你在加入之前要慎重对待（put forward;be cautious to ;join in )
he often put forward some unsual plans .before you join in ,you should be cautious to treating
6.谁是第一个反对“地心说”的人？（reject;universe)
who is the first again ....后半句不会了.教我下吧
7.虽然他的写作没什么意思,但弗雷德还是确信自己的作文会得高分.(make sense ;postive )
这句也不会教下吧!
求各位高人老师们帮我认真检查下吧!打字不容易啊,查出错的写明原因有加分啊!!!!!

Answer 1

1.除了去公园以外，我的活动范围仅限于临近地区（ apart from;movement;neighbourhood)
Apart from going to the park,my activity of movement is neighbourhood
Apart from going to the park, my movement is limited/restricted to the neighbourhood.
(圆字打错了，应该是园。movement就已经函盖了活动范围，不用再加activity。)

2.没有足够的证据很难作出结论（draw a conclusion )
without enough evidence ,it is difficult to draw a conclusion
It is difficult to draw a conclusion without enough evidence/proof.
(这样的顺序比较常用。如用 Without....开始，注意W要大写)

3.这些科学的探询将有助于我们项目的成功（scientific enquiry ;contribute to )
these scientific enquiry will contribute our program to success
These scientific enquiries will contribute to the success of our project/program.

4.居斯夫特埃非尔对他修建铁塔的计划满怀热情，而这座塔使他闻名于世（enthusiastic;construct )
Gustave Eiffel is enthusiastic about his plan that construct towel ,this towel make him well known.
Gustave Eiffel was enthusiastic about his plan to contruct a steel tower which made him famous/ well known.
(towel 是毛巾，tower才是塔)

5.他常提出些不同寻常的计划。你在加入之前要慎重对待（put forward;be cautious to ;join in )
he often put forward some unsual plans .before you join in ,you should be cautious to treating
He often puts forward some unsual plans/ideas. So you should be cautious to this before you join in.

6.谁是第一个反对“地心说”的人？（reject;universe)
who is the first again ....后半句不会了.教我下吧
Who was the first person that rejected the geocentric theory? (其实不用universe这个单词更好，但必须用的话，就如下：)
Who was the first person that rejected the theory of the universe revolving around the Earth?

7.虽然他的写作没什么意思,但弗雷德还是确信自己的作文会得高分.(make sense ;postive )
Even though Fred doesn't think the piece of homework he wrote makes much sense, he is still very positive that his composition will get good grade.

Answer 2

应该没有，我查了字典的。

Answer 3

1. My movement is just around the neighbourhood. activiy可以不用的 跟movement重复。
2. :)
3.enquiries, contribute to our success
4.is enthusiastic for his plan about constructing the towel,which makes him famous. 你那原句前后主语都不一致啦，用个定语从句好一点。
5. puts forward 注意最基本的第三人称哦，你这种错误没少犯。
Be cautious to it before you join in.
不要逐字句对应翻译，生硬复杂又不对。
6.Who is the first one to reject the geocentric theory of the universe?
7.Although his writting doesn's make any sense, he is still postive that it will get a nice score.
这里make sense 不是没什么意思的意思 不是not interesting，而是没什么道理。it doesnt make any sense：那一点儿也讲不通。

大概就这些吧，希望能帮到你:)

Answer 4

1.Apart from going to the park,my range of movement is limited to the neighbourhood.
3.These scientific enquiries will contribute to the success of our program .
4.Gustave Eiffel was enthusiastic about his plan for constructing the and this towel made him well known.
5.He often puts forward some unsual plans .Before you join in it,you should be cautious to it.
6.Who was the first to reject the theory of universe.
7While .his writing doesn't make any sense,Fred is positive that he can get a high mark in his composition.