最好留下QQ谈,谢谢。
Today, I went to the swimming pool. I came to the swimming pool. I don't want to go on. Because have many people,and like under the dumplings as, one by one. But Li Yefan is pulled by me. 就这段,如果有错还请指出,教教我怎么改,谢谢
Today, I went to the swimming pool. I came to the swimming pool. I don't want to go on. Because have many people,and like under the dumplings as, one by one. But Li Yefan is pulled by me. But Li Yefan is pulled by me.就这段,如果有错还请指出,教教我怎么改,谢谢
追答1. I went to the swimming pool. I came to the swimming pool.这两句重复啊~~还是用前面那句吧
2. because前逗号,之后的句子语法不通,改为:“,because there was so many people just like dumplings in the boiling water”
3. 后边两句重复啊,也看不明白啥意思,是说你把Li Yefan 推下水了吗?
2.因为有那么多人喜欢饺子在沸水中?我要说的是:因为有很多的人,像下饺子似的,一个接一个。
3.是Li Yefan把我推下水
我说的就是这个意思啊,人就像沸水里的饺子似的~~
Li Yefan把我推下水:改为:But finally I was pulled into the pool by Li Yefan.
because there was so many people just like dumplings in the boiling water。这个地方为什么用just?