帮忙看看翻译的这句话对不对

Question

针对大学生网络游戏成瘾这一日益严重的社会问题 ,文章就其危害性进行了深入分析。并从个人、学校、家庭、社会四个方面提出了全面系统的应对措施。

译：In view of college student online game addiction, a growing social problem, the article farther discusses the harm it brings. And then, it analyzes from a college student himself school family and the society the four ways to tell the step to take.

Answer 1

错了！译： Became addicted to this serious social question in view of the university student network game, the article has carried on the thorough analysis day by day on its hazardous nature. And from individual, the school, the family, the social four aspects proposed the comprehensive system's counter measures.

Answer 2

汉式英语，语序太乱了。还有语法错误。