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Question

1，为什么报考厦门大学
首先，我非常喜欢金融，而厦门大学的金融在中国具有很高的声誉．这里有很多杰出的教授和专家，有很强的科研实力和浓厚的学术氛围．
其次，厦门大学的环境非常漂亮，我认为幽雅的环境是从事研究的最好地方，设想一下，如果我能在这样美丽的校园中学习和生活，那将是一件多么美妙的事情．
第三，我觉得我的智商并比比别人低，因而有能力争取来厦门大学学习．我想通过我的努力，我完全能够掌握专业的知识，做一个合格的厦大人．
2．我的大学介绍
我本科时候的大学是燕山大学，起源于哈尔滨工业大学，可谓系出名门．它坐落于一个美丽的海滨城市－秦皇岛，经过80多年的发展，他已经成为一所以工为主，文史经管法协调发展的综合性大学，在大学四年中，我学会了独立，乐观和坚强，我要感谢那里的老师对我的培养和教育

Answer 1

1.Why I choose Xiamen University?
First, I like finance very much, and finance enjoy high prestige in Xiamen University. There are many excellent professors and experts, and strong scientific research strength and good learning atmosphere.
Second, the environment in Xiamen University is very beautiful. I think this is a perfect place to do research. If I can study and live in this kind of beautiful campus, that is a wonderful thing for me.
Third, I believe that I am as clever as somebody else, so I have the ability to study here. I want to be an eligible student here, because I can grasp professional knowledge through my hard working.
2.The brief introduction of my university.
I got my bachelor’s degree in Yanshan University, which is derived from Harbin Industry University that is also a famous university in china. It located in a beautiful seashore city—Qinhuangdao. It has been a comprehensive university covering industry, art, economy, administration, and law, which are developed harmoniously. When I was studying here for four years, I owned dependent, optimized and strong characteristic, and I should thank all the teachers here for my cultivation and education.

看到楼上的是用软件翻译的,
我这个是一字一句翻译的哦
我是专职的工程翻译,可能在此方面有些不妥,
希望专家可以指明,
也希望你可以满意我的回答!

Answer 2

1, why registers for the Xiamen University First, I extremely like the finance, but Xiamen University'sfinance has very high prestige. here in China to have professor andthe expert which Duojie leaves very much, has the very strongscientific research strength and the strong academic atmosphere. Next, Xiamen University's environment is extremely attractive,I thought the quiet and tasteful environment is engaged in theresearch the best place, conceives, if I could in the such beautifulcampus the study and the life, that be a how wonderful matter. Third, I thought my intelligence quotient and compares theothers to be low, thus has the ability to struggle brings the XiamenUniversity to learn from. me to want through mine endeavor, Idefinitely can grasp the specialized knowledge, is a qualified mansionadult. 2. my university introductions My undergraduate course time university is the Mt. yanshanuniversity, origins to the Harbin industrial university, it may besaid ofs noble descent. it to be situated to a beautiful seashore city- Qinhangdao, passes through more than 80 years development, healready became one therefore the labor primarily, the literature andhistory had control over the law coordinated development thecomprehensive university, in the university four years, I has learnedthe independence, optimistic and was strong, I had to thank thereteacher to my raise and the education

Answer 3

赞赏一下楼上，顺便贡献下我自己的意见，有些也许是我参考你的中文意思自己写的，未必是逐字逐句翻译，参考一下吧：

1. Why do I apply for Xiamen University
Firstly, I have great interest in Finance. Financial Study in Xiamen University has renowned reputation. There are many outstanding professors and experts in the University, and it possesses great strength in research and provides a good academic environment.

Moreover, Xiamen University has beautiful campus; and I believe such environment is the best place for research. Just imagine, if I could live and study in this beautiful campus, what a wonderful thing that would be.

Thirdly, I believe in my ability and I have the aptitude to compete for a place in Xiamen University. I think by working hard, I would be able to master professional knowledge and become an qualified member of Xiamen University.

2. Information about my university
I took my bachelor degree in Yanshan University, which was formerly Harbin Industrial University, and it is a famous university as well. It is located in a beautiful seashore city-Qinghuangdao. After more than 80 years of development, it has become a comprehensive university with Industrial study as its main faculty, but branches its areas of study out to Arts, Economy and Law as well. These faculties develop harmoniously.

During the four years of study in Yanshan University, I learnt to be independent, optimistic and strong. I am grateful of the education and nurturing provided by my teachers there.本回答被提问者采纳