请英语高人进来指教! 一篇极短的文本

Question

I think reading news on the computer is the best choice. First, reading on a computer is very convenient, the all thing we need is a computer. As soon as it is connected with Internet, the all kinds of news are available for us anytime, anywhere. What’s more, getting news on the computer doesn’t consume anything, and in other words, we can save money by doing this. Third, we can share our opinions with other readers and get as much related information as we want in one second. That’s the reason I prefer to be informed about the news by a computer.

请帮助改正其中的语法错误和用法不自然的地方. 若有高阶词汇的替换则更好,谢谢!

Answer 1

First, reading on a computer is very convenient, because all thing we need is a computer. As soon as the computer is connected with Internet, all kinds of news are available for us at anytime, anywhere.What’s more, getting news on the computer doesn’t consume anything,in other words, we can save money by doing this. Those are the reasons why I prefer to be informed the news by a computer.

Answer 2

all the thing we need
as soon as it is connected to the internet,all the kinds...for us anywhere,anytime.

be informed about 换成 inform