我的一篇高二英语作文,请指教

最近你校学生会组织学生开展了一场讨论,主题是:What is the beauty standard? 假如你是学生会主席,请根据下表学生讨论的结果写一份总结材料,谈谈你的看法。

学生观点一:
好脸蛋就是一封介绍信
在社交、竞争、求职等方面作用大
学生观点二:
漂亮不能当饭吃
追求外在美而放弃内在美不是真正的美

你的看法……

注意:1.参考词汇:介绍recommendation; 2.词数:100-120字左右,已给开头不计入词数。

What is the beauty standard?

What does beauty really mean? Everybody has his own ideas on beauty.

我的文章:What does beauty really mean? Everybody has his own ideas on beauty.The first main opinion is that a pretty face is just a letter of recommendation, which adds great advantage to your impression on others when you are in such a situation like social activities, competition and job interview. However, other students took the view that beauty is not necessary as food that we do not depend on it every day. It isn’t real beauty to attach more significance on physical beauty regardless of the spiritual beauty.
In my opinion, standard varies among different society and culture. Both physical and spiritual beauty definitions on beauty are right.

希望能有高人指出错误。
另外,我觉得"Physical beauty"这个词用的很生硬,很蹩脚,我想表达“外在美”这个意思,应该用哪个词更好一些?

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