翻译（急）-加强我国中央银行独立性的必要性

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加强我国中央银行独立性的必要性
加强中央银行的独立性已经成为各国经济政策实现的一个重要目标，在我国也是如此：很多学者也主张央行应该保持独立性。
中央银行独立性，是指法律赋予中央银行在国民经济宏观调控体系中制定和执行货币政策、进行金融监管与调控的自主权，以及为确保自主权的有效行使而采取的相关法律措施。亦即使中央银行与政府、与政府各部门、与商业银行等金融机构相对独立，尤其是要与政府相对独立。
依我看来，中国人民银行有必要加强较高的独立性。中国中央银行的独立性相对于其他国家而言是比较弱的。我国《中国人民银行法》规定“中国人民银行在国务院领导下依法独立执行货币政策，履行职责，开展业务，不受地方政府、各级政府部门、社会团体和个人的干涉。”这就是说中央银行是政府调控的一个机构，很难独立行使货币政策的功能。所以，人民银行有必要加强其独立性，以便于更好地制定货币政策，使其保持币值稳定。
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你的翻译有很多语法错误，我希望谁重新翻译一下

Answer 1

Strengthens the our country Central Bank independent necessity
Strengthened the Central Bank the independence already tobecome the various countries economic policy realization a profitabletarget, in our country also was so: Very many scholars also advocatedthe central bank should maintain the independence.
The Central Bank independence, is the fingering law entrusts with theCentral Bank in the national economy macroeconomic regulation andcontrol system the formulation and the execution monetary policy,carries on financial supervising and managing and the regulative rightto independence, as well as for guarantees the related legal measurewhich the right to independence effectively exercises adopts. Alsoeven if financial organ relative independence and so on Central Bankand government, with government various departments, with commercialbank, wants and the government relative independence in particular.
Looked like according to me that, the People's Bank of China has thenecessity to strengthen a higher independence. The China CentralBank's independent disposition says regarding other countries is quiteweak. Our country "People's Bank of China Law" under stipulated "thePeople's Bank of China leads legally the independent executionmonetary policy in the State Council, fulfills the responsibility, thedevelopment service, not local authority, all levels of governmentdepartment, social group and individual interference." This meant theCentral Bank is an organization which the government regulates, verydifficult independently to exercise the monetary policy function.Therefore, the People's Bank has the necessity to strengthen itsindependence, in order to Yu Genghao formulates the monetary policy,causes its maintenance currency value to be stable.

Answer 2

Strengthen the independent necessity of the our country National Central Bank
The independence which strengthens National Central Bank has already become an important target of economic policy realizations in all countries, in the our country is also such:A lot of scholars also laying claim to a central bank should keep independence.
The National Central Bank independence, mean the law gives National Central Bank the establishment and the performance monetary policy in the national economy macro view adjust control the system and carries on finance take charge of and adjust to control of independent power, and for insure independent power to exercise but adopt effectively of related law measure.That is make National Central Bank and government, and each section of government, with commercial bank etc. the financing institution is independently opposite, wanting particularly with government opposite independence.
In my eyes, Chinese people's bank has a necessity to strengthen higher independence.The independence of the Chinese National Central Bank is in opposition to other nations the ratio is weaker.Our country 《Chinese people bank method 》provision"Chinese people the bank leads in State Department under independent carry out monetary policy by law, implement a job, open exhibition business, be free from local government, all levels government section, social group and personal interference."This is to say the National Central Bank is an organization that the government adjusts to control, the very difficult independence exercises the function of[with] monetary policy.So, people's bank has a necessity to strengthen its independence, in order to in draw up monetary policy betterly, make it keep a currency value stability.