第1个回答 2009-03-14
My name is XX, from XX provinces, 4 years ago, I entered the XX University, read the Pharmaceutical Engineering.
University four years, I had a lot of harvest. At the university, freshman to be elected to the Math A classes, take part in math competitions, and awards. Teacher Maidong about to do with the volatile oil constituents of the research, and has been at the core journals in Anhui thesis opportunities. Also participated in many activities, such as: graduates evening, visit the elderly homes for the elderly, take part in plantation garden celebration and so on, not only delivered a lot of friends, but also enriched my college life, an increase of my field of vision.
My character, cheerful and lively, interested amateur, the broad-loving. Enjoy singing, badminton, tennis. Academically speaking, do not know about his knowledge must study hard will go until all understand. Want to enjoy problem, doing things in detail. Their own weaknesses is that some time would be more impetuous. Trust me in the learning process will be gradually corrected.
I chose the profession of biomedical engineering, apart from the result of my interest, but also because I think I can get on the profession at a very good score. The profession with the math and physics, chemistry and so on have great relevance. My math from a young age has been very good, at the University of the study and physics-related courses, such as: physical chemistry, chemical engineering, etc. The principle, I also have made more than 80 points score. In my area of expertise, but also a lot of study of chemistry, with some expertise. For other study had no knowledge, I have enough interest and time to know and study efforts.
第2个回答 2009-03-17
这象一封申请上外国大学的信。看了上面四层楼提供的“作品”,恐会误人大事。
第3个回答 2009-03-06
My name is XX, from XX provinces, 4 years ago, I entered the XX University, read the Pharmaceutical Engineering. University four years, I had a lot of harvest. At the university, freshman to be elected to the Math A classes, take part in math competitions, and awards. Teacher Maidong about to do with the volatile oil constituents of the research, and core journals in Anhui Province has issued a paper on opportunities. Also participated in many activities, such as: graduates evening, visit the elderly homes for the elderly, take part in plantation garden celebration and so on, not only delivered a lot of friends, but also enriched my college life, an increase of my field of vision. I am cheerful and lively personality, amateur interestContext, a broad-loving. Enjoy singing, badminton, tennis. Academically speaking, do not know about his knowledge must study hard will go until all understand. Want to enjoy problem, doing things in detail. Their own weaknesses is that some time would be more impetuous. Trust me in the learning process will be gradually corrected. I chose the profession of biomedical engineering, apart from the result of my interest, but also because I think I can get on the profession at a very good score. The profession with the math and physics, chemistry and so on have great relevance. My math from a young age has been very good, at the University of the study and physics-related courses, such as: physical
,Chemistry, Principles of Chemical Engineering and so on, I also have made more than 80 points score. In my area of expertise, but also a lot of study of chemistry, with some expertise. For other study had no knowledge, I have enough interest and time to know and study efforts.
第4个回答 2009-03-11
call XX, from XX province, 4 years ago, I enters XX university, what reads is the drugs manufacture project specialty. the university for four years, I have harvested many. In the university, big one chooses to study to mathematics A class, participates mathematics competition, and obtains the award item. Does with teacher about the wheat winter volatile oil ingredient topic research, and had has published the paper opportunity in Anhui core journal. Also participated in many activities, for instance: The graduate party, sees home for the elderly old person, participates in the plantation, the school anniversary visits a park and so on, not only has handed over many friends, but also has enriched my university life, grew my field of vision. I the disposition open and bright lively, the extra-curricular interest aspect, the hobby is widespread. Likes singing, the badminton, the tennis and so on. On the learning, the knowledge which will not understand regarding oneself certainly will go to make an effort to study diligently, yizhi dao will understand completely. Likes thinking the question, does the matter to be quite careful. Their weakness are, some time will be quite impetuous. Believed that I will correct slowly in the learning process. I choose bio-medical engineering this specialty, except mine interest result, but because also I thought that I can make the very good progress in this specialty. This specialty and mathematics and physics, chemistry and so on have the very big connection. My mathematics has been very since childhood good, studies and the physical related curriculum in the university, for instance: The physical chemistry, the chemical principle and so on, I have also made 80 point above progress. In mine professional field, also has studied many chemistries, had the part specialized knowledge. Has not studied the knowledge regarding other, I also have the enough interest and the time understand diligently and study.
第5个回答 2009-03-06
我的可以试试哈,我还根据您写的中文的段落,把英语也分段了,这样会比较好看。
I call XX, from XX provinces, 4 years ago, I enters XX universities, what read was the drugs manufacture project specialty.
The university for four years, I have harvested. In the university, big one chooses to mathematics A class to study, participates in mathematics competition, and obtains the award item. Does with the teacher about the wheat winter volatile oil ingredient topic research, and had has published the paper opportunity in the Anhui core journal. Also participated in many activities, for instance: The graduate party, visits the home for the elderly old person, participates in the plantation, the school anniversary visits a park and so on, not only has handed over many friends, but also has enriched my university life, grew my field of vision.
My disposition is open, the extra-curricular interest aspect, the hobby is widespread. Likes singing, badminton, tennis and so on. On the learning, the knowledge which does not understand regarding oneself certainly will make an effort to study diligently, to understands completely. Likes thinking the question, does the matter to be quite careful. Own weakness is, some time will be quite impetuous. Believes that I will correct in the learning process slowly.
I choose bio-medical engineering specialty, is the result besides my interest, but because also I think that I can make very good progress in this specialty. This specialty and mathematics and physics, chemistry and so on had very big connection. My mathematics has been very since childhood good, studies and physical related curriculum in the university, for instance: The physical chemistry, the chemical principle and so on, I have also obtained over 80 points result. In my professional field, has studied many chemistries, had some specialized knowledge. Has not studied knowledge regarding other, I have enough interest and time understand diligently and study.