我根据您所上传的照片,将照片中的英语作文修改了一下,供您参考。英语作文的语言表达,除了符合语法逻辑以外,还要尊重并尽量保持英语原有的表达习惯,避免“中式英语”现象。修改后的作文如下:
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to you for inviting you to take part in the party of Lucy's birthday. We have invited some friends with whom we used to get on well, and there would not be any stranger at the party. Besides, each of us has prepared our own gifts for Lucy and some activities for the party, so I think we will surely have a good time.
I know you have been busy for your study in recent years, but actually we have not been in contact for a long time. We all miss you and love you all the time, and we desire to listen to your sweet voice again. Therefore, please do not let us down, will you?
The party will be held at Lucy's house this Friday night. Looking forward to seeing you at the party.
Yours truly,
Li Ke
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