每篇10处错误,一共2篇,就是20处错误
第一篇:
It is almost five years since I begin to learn English.I'm glad to say I'm getting along good with it.But first I came across a lot of difficulties.I couldn't pronounce English words we'll,so could I remember the words I had learned.In class ,I couldn't understand that the teacher had said.I amlost lost heart when the teacher told me,"Keeping on,and you'll do we'll ,"I was great encourage.i started working hard at English .Under the help of him and my classmates ,I made some progresses .I'm very pleaseing ,and I will work harder .
第二篇:
One day I went to the market and find many beautiful bird in a few cages for sale .I heard two young men talked .One said ,"I caught eight birds as these last Sunday ,but not a single one was alive next morning ."Oh ,God!The birds are being killed .The number is reduceing year .Birds ,like animals ,are our friends .They eat a lot of pests and make our nature beautifully .So we must do something to protect it from being killed .We hope how everyone care for them .
谢谢咯