在线求英语强人翻译香港大学自我介绍（不用翻译软件）

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250字的介绍，多用高级句型，避免语法错误
有加分，如果不够的话我多开几个，急

作为一名大陆学生，我被香港大学的国际化视野和全人教育的教育理念吸引。我希望在香港大学接受不同的教育，完善自己（这段我也不知道怎么说了，大家有什么好用的套话就写吧）
关于专业，我的第一选择是--BBA-，第二选择是---BECON-，我认为工商管理是港大最好的专业之一，能培养我各方面的能力。
我认为我具有三个能让我具有就读港大资格的优势
1.独立思考的习惯 我从小喜爱阅读 养成了独立思考的习惯，我明确的知道我希望成为什么样的人并愿意为之努力
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3.（2.3我自己写...）
我希望就读港大成为我人生的转折点，（后面也随便写一两句套话...）

Answer 1

Goodafternoon dear friends,my name is XXX ,I am 19,I am from Shanghai city,the biggest and flourishing city in China,I want to say I love my hometown ,and be proud to introduce to everyone.Now I am studing in XXXXpolytechnic school,The chemical technology is the major I am studing,In these years ,I worked hard and made many achievements,respect all the teachers and my parents,I am a obliging
boy,I have the good practical ability on the works,and the strong concept of collective.the spirit of solidarity and cooperation
Although my school record is not the best one ,but like most Shanghai people have the characters of contract awareness and the awareness of the law,I can discipline myself and keep the school rules ,I belive I can do more better in the future days,and I hope you can give me this
chance ,to develop my ability to the full on the stage you give me
I will never let you disappointed
Thank you.