英语作文 求修改 顺便给个分数吧， what electives to choose As we all know that every university has

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various electives for our students to choose.There often has arts,science,biology math and so on.And students can choose electives that they are fond of.If a student likes painting very much ,so he may choose arts for his one electives.And other one enjoys photographing,he can choose potograph course.It's not only depends on one's interests but also one can choose course for use .One student ,for example, he doesn't like it at all while he choose english for a elective.
On my own,i often choose the electives which i like or which attracts me very much.I am curious about things i don't know.so i will choose some course that i haven't learn about

Answer 1

要按15分算，属于5分档。基本切题，但错误较多，表达上也不到位。另外，你举的“electives”的例子也不合适，如math, biology等肯定是必修课 而不会是选修课。另外如果你是准备四级，这篇可以不准备，07年考过了。找了一篇别人写的供你参考。
With the reform of Chinese higher education, more and more colleges and universities put emphasis on nurturing students’ abilities. As a result, elective courses are available not only for excellent academic performers but also for students about the average level.
　　Certainly, students have different reasons to choose their own electives. For some, practical skills are the essence of college education, and therefore, courses on computer science, marketing, and finance are highly preferred. On the other hand, others may hold the idea of liberal education and electives concerning literature, history, and philosophy are the most welcome.
　　Take myself as an example: being a disciple of free education, I stand for the notion that university is not a place for survival skills, but a palace of knowledge and critical reasoning. Although my major is chemistry, the electives I attend most frequently are English literature, an Introduction to Classic Music, and Different Schools of Western Painting. They really widen my horizon.

Answer 2

THERE ARE various electives for our students to choose.There ARE arts,science,biology math and so on.And students can choose electives that they are fond of.If a student likes painting very much , HE may choose arts AS ONE OF HIS electives.And other oneS ENJOY photograPHY,he can choose potographY course.It's not only depends on one's INTEREST but also ON THE use THE COURCE OFFERS. One student ,for example, doesn't like it at all while he choose english for a elective.
FOR ME,i often choose the electives which i like or which ATTRACT me very much.I am curious about things i don't know. so i will choose some course that i haven't learn about

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Answer 3

various electives for our students to choose. There often is arts,science,biology math and so on. Students can choose electives that they are fond of. If a student likes painting very much ,so he may choose arts for his one electives. And other one enjoys photographing,he can choose photograph course. It's not only depends on one's interests but also one can choose course for use .For example, a student doesn't like it at all while he choose english for a elective.
On my own,i often choose the electives which i like or which attracts me very much. I am curious about things i don't know. so i will choose some course that i haven't learn about

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