上面是中文的，下面是英文的，好的话，要采纳，谢谢！
暑假到了，炎炎的夏日，知了叫了，我在这个暑假里有了个新的安排。每天早上7点钟起床洗脸刷牙，接着出门锻炼身体：去爬烂柯山。锻炼好再到附近的小摊上买早饭吃。吃好早饭，回家后，读读英语，做下数学题目。到了中午，吃完中饭就帮父母干干家务，然后休息下看电视，睡觉。睡好觉后去游泳晚饭吃好后，玩电脑，休息。这是我一天大概的安排。有什么不好的地方可以修改。名师点评：虽然小作者的这个暑假安排表较为简单，但也体现出了小作者要把自己的生活安排得合理紧凑的一片苦心。建议做一张详细的作息时间表，这样就能更有效地利用时间了。优秀是一种习惯，成功来源于坚持。希望能取得更大的进步！
Summer arrived, hot summer day, cicadas called, I in this summer with a new arrangement. Get up at 7 o 'clock every morning wash a face to brush my teeth, and then go out to exercise: go to climb the lousy plays. Exercise good to the stall near buy breakfast. Eat good breakfast, after coming home, and read English, do math problem. By noon, eat lunch will help parents do housework, then a break watching TV and go to bed. A good night's sleep go swimming after dinner, playing computer, have a rest. This is my day of about arrangement. What bad places can be modified. Teacher comment on: although small the author's this summer schedule is simple, but also reflects the young writer to their own life for a rational compact a painstaking. Suggest a detailed timetable, so that it can be more effective use of time. Is a good habit, success comes from persistence. Hope can make great progress!
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