我写了一些英文歌词,大家帮我看看有么有什么错误。恳请指正不吝赐教

i show you my destiny,i won't be slave of university.i know you walk with girl and enjoy KFC.every one laugh at my story.that's all

right. i wanna be Nietzsche .i wanna be van gogh.i wanna change unfair period.so i refuse to believe everything will be okay.doubt is my mission.you can get beauty、house、money but no choice to share sunshine 、wind 、natrue. i choose.i like.it's my freedom even if i

was destroy.at list i didn't give in destiny and education.but you no.but you never know.how sad、ludicrous and miserable slave.you look like a dog of authority and truth.just so so. how love me so?and so,i dispise whatever you say. the pefect i decided.now it's nothing but my way.go go go ,c'mon baby,c'mon baby.stand up,stand by me and dance amuke.just the way you are and breath fresh air.

oh oh

shian&fong:lov'in you.i wish you achive ur dream.at your best.

fong:wooh

1. it's my freedom even if it was destroy(destroyed)

lol bravo you are! have a nice day!
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