第1个回答 2014-10-09
不能,第一句语言习惯不对。另display 少了谓语。
We have implemented the steps what you mention. In additon, "Gold Seal Samples" are already displayed in the report.
第2个回答 2014-10-09
These steps you mentioned have been ipemented by us, in addition the "gold seal samples" have been shown in the report.
像楼主的句子在英语里用被动态为好,显示用display不大好,因为报告是纸面的,所以建议用show。
第3个回答 2014-10-09
前面一句的语序有问题,应该改成:We have implemented these steps you mentioned. 后面一句在displayed前加has been,变成被动。 精锐长宁天山中心英语组
第4个回答 2014-10-09
ok的,前半句改成those steps you mention we had implemented更好,不过你的也看的懂
第5个回答 2014-10-09
应该为:
We have conducted the steps which you metioned,in addition,"golden seal samples" have been presented in the report.本回答被提问者采纳