急急急!十万火急！哪位高手帮我把下面这段话翻译成英语，感激涕零

Question

爱音乐，爱篮球，爱网络，不爱网游，爱知识，爱知天下事，爱感悟生活中的点滴，我不是凡客，我是xxx，来自xxx，我有过很多愿望，但我现在最大的愿望是通过自主招生考试，也许你说我机会渺茫，但我相信我有能力做到，我的座右铭是天道酬勤.
贵校电子类学科属行内翘楚，为国家输送大量人才，我希望能通过这次机会实现我就读贵校的理想！
在线等！！真的很急！！

Answer 1

急你所急。你的中文很棒！相信为你提供的这段译文也不差，可帮你考上心仪的学校。根据英文习惯，对句子顺序稍作了调整。为你加了开头和结尾。日期是暂时的，你可更改：

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am xxx from xxxx. I love music, basketball, knowledge, particularly about everything under the sun and appreciation of every tidbit one can glean from life; I don't like web-surfing. I am not an average applicant. I have had many wishes, but now my great wish is to pass the independent college enrollment exam. Perhaps you may say I chance is slim but I am sure I am capable of passing it. My motto is: God reward the most diligent.

Your university's electronics specialty leads this profession and has been supplying the country with many talented people. Through this opportunity, I hope to fulfill my dream about studying in you university.

I remain yours most faithfully,
xxx (你的名字中文拼音)

注：我假定你是申请大学，所以用了university一词。如果你报考的学校是学院college，那就请你在两个地方改用为college.

Answer 2

zhong nan外国人不好发音 也比较难记住 所以识别度会有问题

翻译了以后的central south说实话也没有什么信息量

名字而已 真的是怎么处理都可以

参考资料：百度一下

Answer 3

Love music, love basketball, love the internet, don't love online gaming, love knowledge, love learning about the world, love appreciating details in life. I'm not Vancl, I'm xxx from xxx. I've had many wishes, but right now my biggest wish is to pass the independent entrance exams. You might say I've got no chance, but I think I have what it takes. As Disraeli once said, “Diligence is the mother of good fortune.”
Your school ranks at the top in the field of electronics, providing the country with lots of skilled， talented people. I want to take this opportunity to realize my dream of studying at your school!

话说无论是college还是university，直接用school都是最好的。

参考资料：在美国上学，也曾成功申请学校

Answer 4

Dear Admissions counselor,

I Love music, basketball, networking excluding games, knowledges, and understanding the perception of life. I'm not a anonymous; I am xxx from xxx. I have desires, but my biggest ambition is to pass the independent entrance examination. You may say I prospects, but I believe in my own ability to handle this. My motto is: "those who work hard are paid off as always."
Your school is prestigious and had nourished leader in large quantities in many different fields. I hope that through this opportunity, you will realize that i am an ideal applicant to your school.

Sincerely,
XXX
March/03/2011

Answer 5

Love music, love basketball, love networking, online games do not love, love of knowledge, love goin, love the bit in the perception of life, I'm not where passengers, I was xxx, from xxx, I have a lot of desire, but I The biggest wish is through independent entrance examination, you may say I prospects, but I believe I have the ability to do, my motto is paid off.
Your school is a line of electronics disciplines within the leader in large quantities for the country people, I hope that through this opportunity to realize the ideal I attended your school!