第1个回答 2017-07-23
我满脸通红,完全不知道自己说了些什么,有点语无伦次。想起在上楼梯时我差一点从楼梯上摔下来,当时我吓得惊愕失色。
句子分析: 句子结构有误,如I think pretty much fell down。pretty much几乎,差不多;sort of 有点。句子应该不止两个谓语。
试改为:I went bright red, and didn't know quite what to say,a sort of fumbled. and I think that, when I pretty much fell down the stairs on the way up, I was completely and utterly awestruck. (5个谓语)
或者:I went bright red, and didn't know quite what to say,a sort of fumbled. and, I think(插入语), pretty much fell down the stairs on the way up. I was completely and utterly awestruck. (4个谓语)