写作思路：首先要写自己的家乡在哪里，然后写自己为什么喜欢家乡和家乡的优点。
I love the motherland, love people, love mom and dad, love my hometown - shaoxing more! “The long no water, sweet shaoxing wine.” Simple and honest in shaoxing people has created a generation of great men. Shaoxing is a of the famous historical and cultural city, bridge township, the winelands, of course, is also a tourist resort.
I love my hometown river, its green let a person enchanted, like a green and clean water. And like a wall, every one in shaoxing, guarded day and night. It clear enough to let us see the fish in the water.
I love the hometown of the shade, it’s lush leaves open to all around, as if in to meet one another out-of-town visitors. Its branches grow again and again, as if in said to us: “you want to study well, like I grow higher and higher, the more to learn, the better!”
I love my hometown, because it is in shaoxing people carried out the construction of the place is so beautiful. The original was narrow and the road is not flat. Only a road, there is no “sidewalk”, “bike lanes” and “motor vehicle”, so the traffic is very chaotic. See now of the road, not only big and very clean. Added “non-motor vehicle lanes,” that’s great!
翻译：我爱祖国，爱人民，爱爸爸妈妈，更爱我的家乡——绍兴！“悠悠鉴湖水，香甜的绍兴酒。”憨厚的绍兴人造就了一代代的伟人。绍兴是一个水乡、桥乡、酒乡的历史文化名城，当然也是一个旅游观光的胜地。
我爱家乡的河，它绿的让人陶醉，好像水中的一条碧绿而干净的带子。又似一堵城墙，日夜守卫着绍兴的每一个人。它清得能让我们看见水中的鱼儿。
我爱家乡的绿荫，它那繁茂的叶子向四周张开，好像在迎接一个又一个外地的游客。它那树枝一次又一次地长高，好像在对我们说：“你们要好好学习，像我一样越长越高，越学越好！”
我更爱家乡的地方，因为是绍兴人把这块地方建设得如此美丽。原来的马路又窄又不平整。只有一条马路，根本没有“人行道”、“自行车道”和“机动车道”之分，所以交通十分混乱。再看现在的马路，不仅大而且十分干净。又增加了“非机动车道”，太好了！