I had a problem sleeping. If you get enough

sleeping that can lead to a better life
请问有对吗?

一个一个来分析。从你写的句子里我发现了你对主从句不太明白,你弄混淆了。
首先,第一个句子是简单句,就是主谓宾,这里用了一个固定搭配,have a problem (in) doing sth.这里的in可以省略。而且你用的是一般过去时态。
第二句,首先你的时态用的是一般现在时态。如果表示的是你经常睡不好那么第一句你应该也用一般现在时have.其次,用if开头的话是用的if引导的条件状语从句,那么主从句都应该是句子,所谓的句子就是有主语谓语宾语的,这里你可以先回去复习一下5种基本简单句,还有if引导的条件状语从句,它还有个主将从现原则。这些是你需要掌握的。这里的错误在于你想表达的是“如果你有充足的睡眠,那么这会让生活变得更好”这里其实你可以用so...that...句型,结果状语从句You get so enough sleep that you can have a better life. 或者用if引导的条件状语从句,这里需要注意的是if在前需要加逗号,如果主句在前则不需要,还有注意“主句将来时,从句就用一般现在时”的原则。还有就是sleep动词和名词一样,不用变形,sleeping是现在分词一般表示睡觉的状态,所以此处你用sleep就可以了无需sleeping.If you get enough sleep, it can lead to a better life.
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第1个回答  2019-01-23
不对
have no problems doing sth做某事无困难
have problems doing sth做某事遇到困难
sleep本身可作名词
I had problems sleeping. If you ge enough sleep.
第2个回答  2019-01-23
I have trouble sleeping. If you get enough sleep, you can lead a better life.
部分词汇释义
睡眠sleep; somnus; dormancy; doss; repose
有问题something the matter
如果if; in case; in the event of; supposing that; in the event
足够enough; sufficient; ample; adequacy; be sufficient for
可以can; may; passable; pretty good; Ok
更好better; so much the better; all the better
生活life; live; livelihood; exist
第3个回答  2019-01-23
不对,最好表达:I had a problem about sleeping. If you get enough sleep that can be a better life.
第4个回答  2019-01-23
I had a problem in sleeping. If you get enough
sleeping It can lead you to a better life.
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