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Today does not have to attend all kinds of training, my mother and I discussed to go to the west Taihu picnic, relax and relax.
A beautiful west Taihu lake, green willow notes blowing in the wind, green grass like to the earth covered with green carpet, colorful flowers blooming so happy, I seemed to suddenly walked into a beautiful landscape painting, happy like a bird open his hands free to run.
Began to picnic, my mother and I found a cool shade under a layer of cloth, put up the tent, comfortably lying in the tent breathing the fresh air by the lake.
I felt a little hungry, I moved out of the stove, took out the backpack early to prepare a variety of food, began our barbecue - mother put the food on the stove roast, I am responsible for the seasoning, with the delicious taste floating over, I greedy saliva will flow down.
Eat and play, play and eat, tired also can rest in the tent for a while, is really cool, I am so happy that I don't want to go home.
今天不用去参加各种训练，我和妈妈就商量了去西太湖野餐，放松放松心情。
一来到美丽的西太湖边，绿油油的柳树纸条随风飘荡，绿茵茵的小草像是给大地铺上了绿地毯，五颜六色的花儿开得那样欢快，我仿佛一下子走进了一幅美丽的山水画中，开心得像小鸟儿一样张开双手自由飞奔起来。
开始野餐，我和妈妈找了一个阴凉的树荫底下铺上一层布，把帐篷搭好，舒舒服服地躺在帐篷里呼吸着湖边的新鲜空气。
感觉到肚子有点饿了，我就搬出带来的炉子，拿出背包里早早就准备好的各种美食，开始我们的野外烧烤——妈妈把食物放在炉子上烤，我负责放作料，随着香喷喷的味道飘过来，我馋得口水都要流下来了。
边吃边玩，边玩边吃，累了还可以在帐篷里休息一会儿，真是爽呆了，我都开心得不想回家了。
翻译
在星期天。我和我的朋友去仁爱农场去野餐。我带了一些鸡蛋和蔬菜。莉莉带了一些牛奶和风筝。简带了面包和香蕉果汁。我们一起做饭。我和简一起放风筝。我们非常开心。