求英语大神指导一下英语作文，感谢

如图，帮忙指出里面的错误，感谢！

推荐答案 2020-07-07

①e-books are more convenience than paper books。convenience是名词，错误。
②any cellphone can install various app that read e-books。逻辑混乱。首先install安装的主语是cellphone，但是手机是不会自己主动安装app的，人才可以。app要加s，因为你说了各式各样的，肯定不止一个。定语从句也是一样的，app是不会读书的。建议改成we can read e-books through various Apps in the cellphone。
③not to mention这句话和第②点有点重复了，建议删除。
④你这篇文章的first of all，second...后面接的内容长短不一，建议拿掉，不然容易让人感觉你后面没话可说了，可以考虑换成其他衔接词。
⑤second一直到nothing这句话，首先制造纸质书making paper books会对环境造成伤害，这句话其实过于绝对，应该说paper books waste too much wood and ink and it is not good for the environment，while e-books are much more environment friendly。
⑥你最后一句说电子书更便宜，你把这句话放到文章最后，注意你用的是last but not least，最为重要的是，明显电子书更便宜这么简单的一句话，放在前面的位置更好。

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有四处复数形式你可以看看改下，倒数第二段最后一个词用anything of those会不会比较好

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