综述：
She has short hair, a cute face and small eyes. Who is she? Ha! She is my robot—Candy Girl. Candy Girl likes eating candies very much.
There are a lot of candies in her pocket. I always get candies from her pocket. That is yum. What is Candy Girl like?
She is clever and hard-working. She can speak Chinese and English. She helps with my study. She is strict with me. She is funny,
too. She always makes me happy. I am good with Candy Girl. We are good friends.
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第1个回答 2010-12-22
My Robot
Last night, I had a beautiful dream.I was very excited that a robot came into my home . I called her Pink because she was wearing a pink dress.
She did all my jobs around the house . She cleaned my house ,mopped the floors , made my bed , cooked meals and dealt with my homework . whenever I asked
her, she did everything that she could so well . She never complained about her physical problems and did not need days off . I was very glad that she serviced me all the time in a day .
Suddenly, my dear Pink disappeared . As I was crying , I found a message with the following words :
My dear friend,
I am not a real girl . I was treated as if I have no fellings , but in fact I wish to be free and play like a real girl , but in your house ,I might feel I was regarded as a maid and not give any consideration like human being .
I feel I was hurt……
Goodbye , my little master .
Oh , I’m very sorry for what I did before . Pink , you are right . I should have treated you as my real friend . Please remember that robot is a member of human beings as well .
修改过了，语病没了本回答被提问者和网友采纳
Last night, I had a beautiful dream.I was very excited that a robot came into my home . I called her Pink because she was wearing a pink dress.
She did all my jobs around the house . She cleaned my house ,mopped the floors , made my bed , cooked meals and dealt with my homework . whenever I asked
her, she did everything that she could so well . She never complained about her physical problems and did not need days off . I was very glad that she serviced me all the time in a day .
Suddenly, my dear Pink disappeared . As I was crying , I found a message with the following words :
My dear friend,
I am not a real girl . I was treated as if I have no fellings , but in fact I wish to be free and play like a real girl , but in your house ,I might feel I was regarded as a maid and not give any consideration like human being .
I feel I was hurt……
Goodbye , my little master .
Oh , I’m very sorry for what I did before . Pink , you are right . I should have treated you as my real friend . Please remember that robot is a member of human beings as well .
修改过了，语病没了本回答被提问者和网友采纳
第2个回答 2010-12-20
写得不错，就有些语病
第3个回答 2010-12-21
= =确实有语病 可就他回答了哈
第4个回答 2013-03-22
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