第1个回答 2007-05-23
Ice Ms. Xin, on the roll No.4 of 12th of " novel monthly magazine ", has published a short story that is called "superman". It is then as publishing , I also feel that this title is very much novel, convenient to also cherish a belly curiosity, have leafed through it. Me remember then the reflection of time, is first , feel that is a little deceived by that title , is second , me feel here always surface have worn some big holes, author I seemingly has no all along, find out it. Recently have again seen on the roll No.9 of 13th of " novel monthly magazine " to sign the writing of a criticism of sword 3, have again also sought Pan Chui Tong in 12th rolls up " No.11 novel monthly magazine " the comment of monarch, just like say this works of ice Ms. Xin , it is the highest expression of her entire thought, so, I again turn that novel to come out and have seen. However me 2th the time that it has seen , me still feel one year much before reflection, have no what change still , advocate self very stubbornly, though intermediate folder two can not still say is the writing of the criticism of literature and art.
� this novel why will be called " superman ", say though on the note of winter fragrance monarch: " if have not cry , him do not be "superman" ", I do not understand so far still, but this is the freedom of author.
Author has special view perhaps for this word of " superman ", however we will know author, is inside this works , it is superman to do not tell us what really, and she need not also tell;
So if have person to say what Bin is author Yi in exceptional expression, say that is so just exceptional , so do not be exceptional, that is not only dogmatical , and will be sniggered by author. ( title and this paper, do not concern originally, however, a lot of persons have misunderstood them often, I just say incidentally and. ) � for on two look , fall like me is in do the criticism of criticism. Expression and the observation of critic for incorrect, book can also criticize object , however my purpose, think here the comment of " superman " of ice Ms. Xin — — the critic like others as, say words modest , so, I am to want to say my opinion of a person about "superman" here to say.
� the works of ice Ms. Xin, I see not much, but I can find out only by her novel that the talent of her poet is very high, the skill of artist is very enough. Is her this novel , still have somewhat poetic flavor than those your works of poetry old man. Her that rich imagination and sincere mood are lovely, meticulous to describe , with clever pen deliver , also develop the speciality of female to reach. But " is exceptional " this novel, I do not dare to say that is successful works , I now take pure attitude , write my opinion to come out , let the reference of all.
� have a kind of literature and art all us can take for the object of criticism, is:
� observation art ( Art ) � expression literature and art � ideological usefulness ( Effect ) � mood usefulness and art though not is can split independently, Ran is the criticism of literature and art , not Fang difference study.
� this novel of " superman " purpose, somebody says the meaning of author, think show from negate ( Verneinung ) reach affirm ( Bejahung ) a kind of process, is:
� negate affirm � this kind of process, book can reach by various way, does "superman" instruct the method that we can reach , but being what? Somebody says that is the realization of love, so, this kind of process is:
� the realization of negative love affirm � if our "superman" depend on this kind of form decompose the time of coming out , our expression time that can feel each part does not accomplish yet, the observation of author does not be not only gone deep into , has the objective phenomenon deceive of quilt on the contrary Appearance De.
� write for example what Bin negative time, author describe is some objective evidently phenomenon, the phenomenon of subjective heart is rare to mention. A defect that this shows really. And open first first sentence say:
" what Bin is a youth of cold heart ", again say his complexion at the back cold Ran, just like author real think what Bin write extremely negative appearance, this is not correct very much.
The pain on the spirit of modern person does not lie in , have negated everything , and lie in that is doubt with depressed, what can not also affirm.
Negate is negative sign affirm , if modern person can be true and negative , fall can also reduce how many pain, however modern person Zhi not whether decide , just just like him Zhi can not affirm. Real, modern person doubts merely , is depressed only, bitter is to can not affirm , also not whether decide. What Bin for Cheng the words that grandmother claims , the doubt that has shown him very is very deep merely, also have no his intrinsic depressed write , when seeing , have the more increased his cold degree only. I feel in this place that the observation of author is not deep , do not make objective phenomenon besides, on the contrary, the objective phenomenon of quilt is hidden. And from extreme negate to change over to affirm , can make via a kind of medium ( Medium ). From turn here there, there will be his possibility ( Possibility ) first, for is will go to one first can left can a right zero point ( Zero Point ), such zero point, is modern person can not affirm , also not whether the depressed state and doubt that decided. From zero point and then affirm , cannot do not have a kind of medium, from negate to reach zero point, also cannot do not have another kind of medium, so negate definite whole process write the time of coming out , is:
� the negative medium shell medium of zero point Yi affirm � change the explanation of a word the time of coming out , for is from negate to reach affirm , cannot not late from the role of medium shell from negate to leave, reach it can be left but right zero point, then again from medium Yi role, leave zero point , nonstop to affirm. So like "superman", it is extremely negative to describe hero , not only say theoretically that come however, still make having given birth on structure a level of defect. All us for a phenomenon, should not observe only for his surface, should depository in surface next depths see really, then can reach do not cover for objective phenomenon to cover. What Bin such person, for "superman" second half look , is easy to move person really, his teardrop just like the two eyes that have filled with him from time to time.
If write like "superman", that is a sentimental doctrine of nervousness ( Sentimentalist ) however.
So if "superman" is to want to show to reach definite process really, still pawn doubt and depressed heat and force write , do not see them and have taken off , do not more say those cold hearts words.
A critic on " novel monthly magazine " praises this cold word very much , says " is author pains make efforts to write, is very sad , contain a lot of tears , read this thing , think carefully that this cold word does not be cried , that real is sink completely the person of darling ". This kind of old type , not reasonable, fanatical criticism, not only in the criticism of literature and art have no slightest benefit, on the contrary, is easy to make one have misunderstood the criticism of literature and art. Should be still sober , should be still serious for the person of the criticism of literature and art, should observe deeply for all usefulness and art — — use sober serious attitude observation, it is just good to also come out with sober serious attitude expression.
� again as the time of the realization that writes love, have used a dreamland, this nature is the very economic law of writing; But this dreamland insert in " to person do not have dream " after, this really self without reason the usefulness that " the past of 3 nights " build , cut strong Nu Zhi last. That dreamland before " sleep next time, him feel heat very ", though use the and so on " tired two days , on daily life naturally, it is unusual to have " at once the logic with peculiar female ( Logic ) come to annotate, can not also cover reluctant trace.
Lu that letter of son, have person to say is not near and realistic too, orginal us current social level low too, it is weak that they show own ability, original not only one ignorant know Lu son is this appearance, is us current upper-class class as well as knowledge class, we can not show in their speech the mood and thought that we will show , however about this, I not only do not say that author is not good, because often feel same suffering, I can't help express sympathizing with in author on the contrary.
I want to be able to warn our youth writer here , do not want to weave inside the current speech of general person into advanced thought again, we must lose this road temporarily, after us can only in dry shallow words and deeds all in, take bent way our thought hint slowly.
Will take true state into account , again sink into simple natural style otherwise describe , in addition perhaps, also have no his law, this is hard matter no doubt, however, I think of the matter that is also impossible not.
� final author write what Bin definite time, I feel that heat has to remain and force is really below. Write that originally initially Ban ice-cold, then have again arranged reluctantly dreamland, again make Lu son have written the letter with very reluctant one, this all usefulness has been very reluctant; And author write what Bin definite time, have again used the sentimental( Sentimental) letter of a he and the tear stains of full surface and his manner only , but do not still get rid of initial grey and cold degree; Us from him affirm , see the effect of power of not affirm at all , so this endures completely, fall like gentle breeze Ou error, on water surface, have blown a level of ripples , is soon again still quiet. Real affirm should in my all the life in, gush forever disaster eliminate agitate , deeply give with strength to spare a kind of cannot wear away impression reader at heart. About this place, ice heart is necligence point. Have person to say that have seen what Bin letter, feel not cry cannot, but this is this letter sentimental ( Sentimentalism ) success, can not pull all usefulness to go up.
Storywriter is biggest with great efforts , should notice the usefulness in the drama of all novels ( Dramatic effect ), critic should also hold sober attitude , pays attention in these places , does not study those applauses of old theatre fan. Old theatre fan does not understand , is artistic , it is again odd to also not speak usefulness , sing again