英语语法改错

Question

For teachers, paying more attention to speaking lessons can improve their level of speaking as well as the enjoyable of a class.这句子哪儿错了？为什么呢？请帮忙详细解答，谢谢

Answer 1

For teachers, paying more attention to speaking lessons can improve their level of speaking as well as the enjoyable of a class.这句子哪儿错了？为什么呢？请帮忙详细解答，谢谢
答：这句话，我想不是一句地道的英语句子。要改错，请首先告诉大家，中文想表达什么意思。
有两点似乎有问题：1. the enjoyable of a class. 显然这enjoyable就用错了，应为一名词。
2. speaking lessons不知道想表达什么。是时下流行的教师“说课”呢？“听说课”中的“口语课”。
speak作为及物动词，其宾语应为"语言"（language, English, Chinese, etc)
主句是：For teachers, Paying more attention to ... can improve their lever of speaking as well as sth.
作为教师，多注意。。。能提高他们的讲话的水平以及。。。
如果有问题，多出在。。。这两个地方。
还请楼主提供中文想表达的意思。追问

其实刚才是找不到中文意思。
它没给一个连续的中文意思,只包含3点内容：（主题是考察口语的好处）教师方面：关注口语教学，提高自身口语水平，提高课堂趣味性

追答

所以这是某人论文的英语摘要对吧？意为：对教师而言，关注口语教学能提高自身的口语水平以及提高课堂趣味性。你不如问：这句话如何翻译，或：译成For teachers, paying more attention to speaking lessons can improve their level of speaking as well as the enjoyable of a class. 让大家帮助修改。

Answer 2

improve 后面的their错了,改为" the students', 按照原来的句子 their就变成是老师的口语水平了
对于老师来说, 更多地关注口语课能提高学生的口语水平同时也能增加课堂的有趣性.

Answer 3

供参考

语法层面
enjoyable改为名词
即enjoyment

意思层面
their是指谁
如果是学生
意思便混淆了
因为单以原句来说
their在这里是指teachers
如果是学生
可以改为
improve their students' levels of

以上是最基本的改动

也可以考虑用
oral lessons来代替speaking lessons
以及用
their classes 来代替a class

此外
我侧向於不用level而用诸如ability等的字眼
不过
正如前述
这些不是必要的改动

Answer 4

这句话听起来怪怪的，我根据你的意思改一下：
As teachers, paying more attention on teaching can inspire teachers' speaking skills as well as enjoy in gaving a class.
作为老师，更用心地教课可以启发教师的说话技巧，并且享受教课

（我觉得这个论点蛮空泛的......）追问

请给出这样改的原因，谢谢

Answer 5

For teachers ,paying more attention to the speaking lessons is more important ,for it can not only improve both they and the students' Level of speaking skill but also they can enjoy the class.