Jenny was a lady of medium height. She wasalso a member ofcrazy shoppers, which meantshe liked shopping a lot. A few days ago, her family moved to a house near a mountain, which was faraway from the town. But it didn’t matter. Nothing could change her minds of shopping and she wouldn’t miss a chance to shop. Oneday, she thought of a good methodto shop in the town---- riding a motorcycle. After arriving in the town, she went to a modern shopping mall. In a clothes shop,there are several modelswith good manners. Shetried on a coat and looked at it in front of a mirror. She felt good and took it. Then she cameto a supermarket. She bought some magazines, most of which are mainly about movies and history of museums. Besides, she bought a washing machine and a mouse for her computer. Whenshe came to the food section, she saw a new kind of pizza, which is mixture of mushrooms and bacons. Shetasted it with her mouth.At that moment, shewas caught by a monitor.So the person who managedthe market criticized her. She said she made a mistake and apologize to him. At last, she boughtsome materials for cookingand some medicines.When she paid with a credit card, she found it minus. So she sent a message to her parents to ask for help. Finally,she managed to go backhome. Maybe itwould be an unforgettable memoryfor her.
III.Chinese Version:
珍妮是个中等身材的女子,她也是疯狂购物者的一个成员。意思就是她非常喜欢购物。几天前,她一家人搬到靠近大山而远离城镇的房子。但是这没关系。没有任何事能改变她购物的想法。她也不会错失任何一次购物的机会。一天,她想出一个去小镇购物好方法——骑摩托车去。到了小镇后,她进入了一个现代化的购物商场。她进了一个服装店。里面有几个举止优雅的模特。她试穿了一件外套。在镜子前看完之后觉得不错,就买下了。然后她来到了超市。她买了一些杂志,期中大多数是关于电影和博物馆历史的。此外,她买了一个洗衣服的机器和电脑鼠标。当她来到了食品区时,她发现了一种以蘑菇和培根的混合物为材料的新披萨。她用嘴尝了一点。就在那时,她被监视器录下来了。因此管理超市的主管批评了她。她说她犯错了,然后向他道歉。最后,她买了一些烹饪的材料和一些药。当她用信用卡结账时,发现卡里的金额是负的。因此她给父母发了消息求助。最后,她成功地回家了。或许这对她来说是一次难忘的记忆。
追问这不是连词成句啊,况且我要的是技巧。