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假设现在是2015年,,你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观,举行聚会,与外星人通电话。。。总之,你们玩得很愉快。 要求:1 准确表达,语法正确,逻辑合理。 2 词数60左右。

现在是2015年。我们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上,我们掩盖不住激动的心情,到处参观起来,说实话,这里的实景与我们想像的完全不一样,遍地都是奇形怪状的石头。同学们在一起唱着歌,跳着舞,疯狂的大笑着,完全就像在举办一场盛大的聚会!后来,老师还拿着电话对我们说:外星人打电话来欢迎我们来到火星参观,希望下次有机会也去我们地球玩玩。呵呵,我们今天真是玩得太开心了,也更加的了解了关于火星的相关知识,对于以后更深入的研究火星有着重要意义!
Now is 2015. Our school has organized a trip to Mars. On Mars, we couldn't disguise excited mood, around up, to be honest, here we imagine the imaging with completely different, everywhere was oddly-shaped rocks. The classmates together singing, dancing, crazy laughing and fully as in held a grand party! Later, the teacher still take a telephone to say to us: the alien phoned to welcome us to Mars, hope to visit us again also go to our earth sometime. Ha ha, we today really play too happy, also more understanding about Mars relevant knowledge, for further research Mars has important significance.
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第1个回答  2010-12-29
now is 2015 year. our school zuzhi le a trip to huo xing.at huoxing we travel everywhere,hold patry and see ET.what is ET? ET is the out star person.they zhangde and we more or less.
they say out star language.we say earth language.language is not same .how to do? luckly there have a phone. the phone is great. it can change the out star language to earth language. so we say hello to them through the phone,and they say nihao as a response.
anyway, we played very happily.
第2个回答  2010-12-29
It is 2050 Our school organized a trip from the Earth to Mars.
Firstly, we reached a space station by a spacecraft after many days.After a short break we entered Mars. The people in Mars are very kind and friendly, and they speck English much better than you.We can see and meet lots of wonderful things like a talking stone.The living environment of aliens is really comfortable.
第3个回答  2010-12-29
It is 2050 Our school organized a trip from the Earth to Mars.
Firstly, we reached a space station by a spacecraft after many days.After a short break we entered Mars. The people in Mars are very kind and friendly, and they speck English much better than you.We can see and meet lots of wonderful things like a talking stone.The living environment of aliens is really comfortable.What a wonderful place!
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