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要求： 1. Do you often help others?
2. How do you help others? ( Give an example / examples. )
3. Why do you offer your help?
Helping others makes me happy
There's no denying that everyone goes through many happy experiences in our life. I often help others and it makes me happy. I still remembered that time two years ago I saw a poor man begging on the road. Nobody helped him that I put some coins into his bowl. The poor man gave me a big smile. I like to help others because when I see someone receives my help, I felt so happy.

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makes-make ; denying-doubt; goes-has gone ;that-the ago when I ; that-but; big-kind; recevve- receiving ; felt-feel

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