初中英语作文：书面表达

Question

叙述一次郊游活动，包含下列内容：
1：时间：上周六，天气晴朗
2：出乘工具：公共汽车
3：地点：海边
4：活动内容：去时花了几个小时，一到海边就搭帐篷.在户外生火做饭，讲故事，唱歌做游戏。
5：感想：很累，但很有趣，大家玩的很高兴。
6：要求：用第一人称，词数80左右，过去式。

Answer 1

It was nice and warm last Saturday because it was sunny.So we went for a picnic near the sea. We took a bus to get there.It took us several hours there.On the way to the beach,we were all very excited.
We put up the tent as soon as we got to the beach.At noon,we cooked on the fire outside the tent.We told some stories,sang songs and played games together.I've never seen so wonderful sea!
At about six o'clock in the evening,we had to go back home because it was too late.We still took a bus home.Though we were tired,we were very happy.Each one of us had a great time.What an interesting day!

Answer 2

I went to the beach with my friends last Saturday. It was fine that day. We went there by bus. It took us a few hours to get there. We began to make fire to cook as soon as we got to the beach. We told stories, sang songs and played games. Although we felt tired, we had fun and enjoyed ourselves very much.

Answer 3

I had a tired but happy Saturday.I went to the beach with my friends last Saturday,
It was a sunny and we were very happy.We went there by bus.We arrived there at 7o'clock.We sang mang songs.And played many interesting games.We ate lunch at 12 o'clock.We cooked many delicious food for ourselves.At 6 o'clock.We must went home.Because it was too late.
We were having a good time last Saturday.
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