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Today, my tropic is music. Music is too big a topic to talk about either specifically and generally. Today, I just want to say something about the music in my life.
I has been in the music since I was born, or I’d bether to say even, before I was born. I listened to prenatal music in my mom’s stomache . And when I was in kindergarten, I began to learn key-board. From that, I knew a lot of musical instruments and beautiful songs.But I didn’t like it at all, because I was only five years old. I’m even too young to reelise what music is.It was the most boring thing to do.I had to practice every day. I hated that.
The emoticn of the music had kept more than eight years. For me, music was practice, was waste the time,though I’m one of few people in my class knew a staff. Three years ago, I said good-bye to the key board. I have a lot of time.No exam,no practice,but music has been part of my life already.Yes,It was such a big change and I couldn’t believe at once. I can’t control myself. I enjoyed symphony, bought CDS, taught musical composition myself. It was crazy. It seemed I wanted to corret my mistakes immediately. It seemed I’m becoming a big fan of classic music beause of its special pcwer. I began to accept pop music though I didn’t like them cery much.
It is my experience Music is like good cooking; it can be tasted, but not explained. I want to enjoy music by heant and keep it forever.
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Today, my topic is music. Music is too big a topic to talk about,and it's either specifical OR general. Today, I just want to say something about the music in my life.
I HAVE been in the music since I was born, or I’d bether to say even, before I was born. I listened to prenatal music in my mom’s stomache . And when I was in kindergarten, I began to learn key-board. SINCE THEN, I knew a lot of musical instruments and beautiful songs.But I didn’t like it at all, because I was only five years old. I'm even too young to reelise what music is.It was the most boring thing to do.I had to practice every day. I hated that.
The emoticn of the music had kept more than eight years. For me, music was practice, was waste the time,though I’m one of few people in my class know a staff. Three years ago, I said good-bye to the key board. I had a lot of time.No exam,no practice,but music has been a part of my life already.Yes,It was such a big change and I couldn’t believe at once. I couldn’t control myself. I enjoyed symphony, bought CDS, taught musical composition myself. It was crazy. It seemed I wanted to corret my mistakes immediately. It seemed I was becoming a big fan of classic music beause of its special pcwer. I began to accept pop music though I didn’t like them AT ALL.
It is my experience .Music is like good cooking; it can be tasted, but not explained. I want to enjoy music by heart and keep it forever.

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