During May day,I went to Shanghai with my family.We all fell in love with it at the moment we saw it.Shanghai is really a beautiful city!There are many tall buildings and trees!There are also many flowers,it makes Shanghai look like a nice garden!If I have oppotunities to visit Shanghai again,I will be very happy!
go to beijing yerstoday.i see great wall and so on .i'm very happy because i see a old red man. he is 95 years old.i like him because he tel our many story.
go to beijing yerstoday.i see great wall and so on .i'm very happy because i see a old red man. he is 95 years old.i like him because he tel our many story.
During May day,I went to Shanghai with my family.We all fell in love with it at the moment we saw it.Shanghai is really a beautiful city!There are many tall buildings and trees!There are also many flowers,it makes Shanghai look like a nice garden!If I have oppotunities to visit Shanghai again,I will be very happy!
在 5 月的一天，我去上海和我的家人。我们都爱上它在我们看到它的时刻。上海真是一个美丽的城市 ！有许多高大的建筑物和树 ！也有许多花，它使上海看起来像一个美丽的花园 ！如果我有机会再次访问上海，我会感到很快乐 ！转到北京 yerstoday.i 看到中国的长城，等等，我真的很高兴，因为我看到一个红色的老人。他是 95 年结交喜欢他，因为他电话我们很多的故事。转到北京 yerstoday.i 看到中国的长城，等等，我真的很高兴，因为我看到一个红色的老人。他是 95 年结交喜欢他，因为他电话我们很多的故事。在 5 月的一天，我去上海和我的家人。我们都爱上它在我们看到它的时刻。上海真是一个美丽的城市 ！有许多高大的建筑物和树 ！也有许多花，它使上海看起来像一个美丽的花园 ！如果我有机会再次访问上海，我会感到很快乐 ！
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