麻烦顺便看下有什么错误没有 谢谢 急!!!!!!!
Dear j:
This is a special day for me。Meibe it is the same to you!However,i'll never forget the day.
First of all,I must say happy birthday to you,Thank your mom for giving you aborn and thank heavens for letting me meet you.
Though,the letter was required by you,but it is a chance for me to say more about you.I think.
To speak frankly,I think i would be hard-heated or icy manner on adolescent love.But the fact is that I was wrong.Because of your appearance after all.
I'm an ordinary person.
In my eyes,you are a cultured but vigorous boy who is never say an obscene language and has some good manners which isn't common in other boys.I still remember those days when you sat in front of me and behind me .Do you know.
My first english name "Angel" was made by you and you wrote it in my dictation book. I like it.Also,you are are the first even the only person who always picked my books up and put it obovethe first everytime.I was moved. What's more, there is a steel ruler which full of story in my mind.So there are many things that flood back for me.
To be honest.Ido really appreciate you very much.you are a so outstanding person while I am inferior to others in many aspects.So,I'm afraid I shouldn't fall in love with you.However,if I can get a high mask in the college entrance examination and you still regard me as water.I think, I would use the key to open you heart.Do you agree with me?
Inorder to achieve my perfect plam.I must study hard.I promise that i'll try my best to never let the person whoever has expectations on me down.Believe me!!
Now,let's talk something about the letter.To begin with,I wrote it in english.so, there is no doubt that it must has lot of spelling errors.But you know,I'm a Chinese,I love my country.... Then,this is an unusual letter.For you, itis tour request.while for me is my first"love letter"So, the feeling maybe a bit srange.isn't? Ha.......And. don't complain that my english-writing is ugly,OK?
or,I would burst out cring.
In fact, as a love letter.I think there must have a sentense which seems neccessary and truly.Make full phychological preparation.please.
I like you.
Best whishes!
Let's make the predestination go on!
May we have a happiness ending just like fainy tale!