答:原题改自此文:难忘的事件 An Unforgettable Incident
Some people live in the world for body while others for dignity.
I once took a walk along the street on a Saturday dusk, 16.【with】 a Pepsi can in my hand. An old woman in ragged clothes staggered towards me, with a sack on the back--another poor woman 17.(【who】 was) living on collecting used cans, jars and tins! 18.【Walking】 nearer she looked up at me and then fixed her eyes on my can. At that time, I hadn't finished my cola, so I gave19.【 her】 several coins instead.
I was wrong.
She stared at me 20.【for】 a few seconds and handed back the money. Quite confused I asked:"Why not? Isn't that 21.【_what_】 you want?"
"I am not a beggar," she said 22.【seriously】, word by word.
Instantly, I felt so sorry. I 23.【 had intended 】to help her, regarded her as a beggar instead of an ordinary man. Thus I hurt her.What I could do at that moment was only to drink up the cola and handed her 24.【the】 emptied can. This time, she gave me a smile with some 25.【_gratification_】 and gratitude in her eyes. The woman is poor in material life but is so respectable as a man. I am not only moved but also have learned a good lesson.
你做对的就不用讲了吧。
17.题作了一些改动。原文中的another ...! 是作者心理的想法。改过之后有欠缺。作者原本是不知道,不认识这人的,以为她与其她的拾荒者没有什么不同,甚至当她是个没有自尊的乞丐!所以才有给钱的举动。
21. isn't that +名词性从句,由what引导的,常译作:XX所XX的。what you want 你想要的
这个that是主语:那不正是你想要的吗?
23. intend 用过去完成时,had intended to do sth.=intended to have done sth.都表示“本想。。。”,
25题你做对了,题目改不当!(不如换一个词考。)这里的gratification 与gratitude是近义词,表示她眼睛里流露出来的是“喜悦和感激”。 用satisfation,是不当的。一般只有父母、老师,长辈等等对子女、小辈、下属表示“满意”,说一个拾荒者对施主表示 satisfaction,用词不当。当然你的填词是对的。
gratification n.
(fml 文)
1 [U] gratifying or being gratified; state of being pleased or satisfied 喜悦; 满意; 满足
satisfaction n.
1 [U] feeling of contentment felt when one has or achieves what one needs or desires 满意; 满足
再看一了一遍原文,作为一篇大学生英语作文,写得确实不错。
不过,文中的两个man用词不当。不如改为:(23题句)an ordinary person 和 (倒数第二句)as a human being.
PS:楼主,你的差到极点,太夸张了!10题对了8题错一题,一题不会,能说差吗?还极点!
过去的谦虚就是骄傲。
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