关于奥运的英语作文，大家帮我改错哈

Question

我这有篇英语作文，那里用错语法之类的，大家帮帮忙哈！

1, The Olympics come from Greece;
2, China applied for and succeeded to 29th Olympics game power;
3, The Beijing Olympics will opening in Beijing August 8 2008
4, This Beijing Olympics game be a history the longest of impress channel and the torchbearer are most of once.
5, people in the world together expect of the Olympics;
6, the slogan of Olympic game in Beijing is:one world,one dream

如果我错得实在太多我会适当加分的``

Answer 1

1, The Olympics come from Greece; come--->comes The Olympics 是单数形式.
2, China applied for and succeeded to 29th Olympics game power;
改 China has won the bid for the 29th olympic game.
3, The Beijing Olympics will opening in Beijing August 8 2008
改 The Olympics will be open in Beijing in 8th August 2008.
4, This Beijing Olympics game be a history the longest of impress channel and the torchbearer are most of once.
读不懂什么意思。
5, people in the world together expect of the Olympics;
改 People in the world all expect the coming of the olympics
6, the slogan of Olympic game in Beijing is:one world,one dream
改 The slogan of the olympic game in Beijing is one world one dream .

Answer 2

1. 对. the Olympics是复数概念.
2, China applied for and succeeded in winning the bid for the 29th Olympics.
3, The Beijing Olympics will open on August 8, 2008(in Beijing). 前已有Beijing,后面就显得罗嗦重复.
4, This Beijing Olympics game be a history the longest of impress channel and the torchbearer are most of once.
的确不懂你想表达什么含义,是不是:
The Beijing Olympic Games will be a history-making success with the most torchbearers of all, which impresses the whole world .
5. People in the world are expecting the coming of the Olympics together;
6. The slogan of the Olympic Games in Beijing is One World, One Dream.
特别提醒: 奥运会 the Olympic Games=the Olympics

Answer 3

1. 对. the Olympics是复数概念.
2, China applied for and succeeded in winning the bid for the 29th Olympics.
3, The Beijing Olympics will open on August 8, 2008(in Beijing). 前已有Beijing,后面就显得罗嗦重复.
4, This Beijing Olympics game be a history the longest of impress channel and the torchbearer are most of once.
的确不懂你想表达什么含义,是不是:
The Beijing Olympic Games will be a history-making success with the most torchbearers of all, which impresses the whole

1, The Olympics come from Greece; come--->comes The Olympics 是单数形式.
2, China applied for and succeeded to 29th Olympics game power;
改 China has won the bid for the 29th olympic game.
3, The Beijing Olympics will opening in Beijing August 8 2008
改 The Olympics will be open in Beijing in 8th August 2008.
4, This Beijing Olympics game be a history the longest of impress channel and the torchbearer are most of once.
读不懂什么意思。
5, people in the world together expect of the Olympics;
改 People in the world all expect the coming of the olympics
6, the slogan of Olympic game in Beijing is:one world,one dream
改 The slogan of the olympic game in Beijing is one world one dream .world .
5. People in the world are expecting the coming of the Olympics together;
6. The slogan of the Olympic Games in Beijing is One World, One Dream.
特别提醒: 奥运会 the Olympic Games=the Olympics