第1个回答 2013-06-07
We would like to know if the products are hold for you until next Thursday. If so, the previously delivery date on 15th of July cannot meet. It requests 7 days minimum in transit.
你是要说请对方确认是否要留到下周4（建议写上日期），如果对方确认要留，那15日就不能交货，因为运输要至少一周，是吧？
第2个回答 2013-06-07
去掉us，if yes 太中文化，改为if so,deliver加ing.
第3个回答 2013-06-07
Please confirm that if we need to hold production for you until next Thursday. If yes, we could not meet previously promised deliver date (July 15th). I think we need to prolong it for at least one week.本回答被提问者采纳
第4个回答 2013-06-07
OK,这样就可以了
第5个回答 2013-06-07
一楼的不行. 你就这么发吧意思他们能懂。不过的确有点错误。