第1个回答 2013-06-09
Over the past couple of years, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media. The problem of food security has become a hot button across society. The prevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which the government could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of the People Daily. There are a couple of driving forces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide. First, in the course of the rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to the rising rate of the problem. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulation and punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend. As Confucius instructed, it is better late than never. Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turn back this evil trend. The government should launch a massive moral campaign to educate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsible corporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again. I am firmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy more risk-free foods in the days ahead. 三段法 第一段写现象 第二段写解决办法 第三段写自己的观点Many people insist that... 1) My favourite sport Football is my favourite sport. It’s one of the most popular sports in the world. Playing football often is good for our health. I like football because it makes me happy and keeps me healthy. No matter what the weather is like, I always play it with my friends. Nothing can stop me. Now I am on our school football team. I often take an active part in football matches. Sometimes I watch a football match on TV. I hope to be a popular football star one day. (2)A trip This afternoon,I went to Xuanwu Lake park with some of my classmates.It is really a wonderful place of interest in Nanjing! The park is not very far away from our school,so we decided to go there by bike.It took us about half an hour to arrive there.There were many people in it.After a short rest,we began to play a game called"hide-and-seek".Every one of us tried to hide in the safest place so that we couldn't be sought by the seeker.I wanted to hide myself beside a huge stone,I ran to it as fast as possible.Unfortunately,I fell down and hurt myself.Luckily,I didn't hurt dadly.In the end ,our team won.How happy we were! We really enjoyed ourselves in the park on that day. (3) Yesterday I played football with my classmates in the rain.When I woke up this moring,I had a headachache,coughed and had a sore throat.I felt so terrible that my mother took me to see the doctor.The doctor asked me some questions and looked me over .He told my mother that I had a bad cold.He gave me some medicine and told me to stay in bed for three days.Though the medicine was really bitter,I took it three times on time.It worked a lot.Three days later,I came back to school again.How I missed my teachers and my classmates! (4) Hello, Everyone! Here are two important activities that happened this week. These days, Li Jia, our classmate, has kept practicing spoken English hard with the teacher’s help. On Wednesday afternoon, she won the first prize in the English speech contest. How exciting it is! We should learn from her. Yesterday, we donated 200 books, 50 backpacks and 4200 yuan for the students in Sichuan. He Li alone donated 500 yuan, the most of all. That’s good. I think that as a student, we needn’t care how much we should give. Showing our love is the most important. That’s all, thank you! 注：Many people insist that. 很多人坚持认为... With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that... 随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为... A lot of people seem to think that... 很多人似乎认为... 引出不同观点: People's views on... vary from person to person. Some hold that... . However, others believe that.... 人们对...的观点因人而异.有些人认为.....然而其他人却认为．．． People may have different opinions on... 人们对...可能会有不同的见解. Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异. There are different opinions among people as to... 关于.... 人们的观点大不相同. Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同. 结尾部分 Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that... 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论... Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that... 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论... 给分吧！！