请用英语写一篇短文,介绍一位你的好朋友LiLei。

  :1他乐于助人,性格外向,兴趣广泛
2他成绩优秀经常在学习上帮助我。
3我准备送他一个…以表达描写感谢。
4我对他的祝福和希望。

Li Lei is one of my best friends.He is a helpful and outgoing boy who has a variety of hobbies.
He always comes to my aid when I have problems in studying because he does very well in studying and is willing to help others.
I am really grateful to him for his help and kindness.I plan to give him a gift to express my gratefulness.Due to the reason that I consider him as a person who helps others without expectation of a reward,I decide to write a letter as a gift.
I hope that he can keep his good qualities and grades,and he will always be happy and be my good friend forever.

1楼写的还行,但是有一些错误,optimistic意思是乐观的,外向用outgoing更合适。
because of his helps,help作名词:帮助时为不可数名词,不用复数形式。
I wish he can,wish后面用虚拟语态,can改成could,而且wish一般表示渴望或者难以实现的愿望,在这里使用不是很合适。
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第1个回答  2013-04-20
您好,

这我编的一篇短文,

请提问者可以参考中文意思:嗨,大家好,今天我要介绍一位我的好朋友,她的名字叫王泽惠,她今年15岁了,她的生日是每年的2月15号,她最喜欢与我们一起玩篮球,有时候我们玩乒乓,她最喜欢的电影明星是刘德华,王泽惠说刘德华很帅,这就是我的朋友王泽惠的所有事情了,谢谢大家!英文:Helloeverybody,todayIwanttointroduceoneofmygoodfriend,hernameisWangZehui,sheis15yearsold,herbirthdayisFebruary15eachyear,shelovestoplaybasketballwithus,andsometimesWeplayping-pong,herfavoritemoviestarAndyLau,AndyLau,WangZehuithathandsome,thisismyfriendWangZehuiofallthings,thankyou!
第2个回答  2013-04-20
My goodfriend is LILei,who is helpful and optimistic (extrovert) . He has lots of interests,such as bedminton and swimming.We often go to swimming pool together in summer holiday
In study,he is outstanding and often helps me.Because of his helps,I caught up with my classmates and passed the test.So I prepare to send him a gift which is a small Teddy bear toy
and say thanks to him . I wish he can feel happiness ereryday with me!
第3个回答  2021-01-04
Leeis my friends,She is girl. She come from the USA. She is beautCow and faith.
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