求高手帮忙写英语作文一篇。

假设你是托尼,现在你和你的噢鞥油门正在颐和园(the Summer Palace)游玩。请你给美国的好友海伦写一张明信片,告诉她你的所见所闻。
提示:1.贝蒂在为她的父母买礼品
2.玲玲在和导游拍照
3.大明在和王老师谈话。
要求:可适当拓展;70词左右。
下列给出的格式。
Sunday
Dear Helen
Today is a fine day
正文
Hope you can isit Summer Palace,too。
Love,
Tony

我临时自己写的望参考。还有“噢鞥油门”是什么东西,我用“friends”代替,可能会有语法上的一些错误,请见谅。
我直接从正文写:
Today is a fine day,My friends and I is playing in the Summer Palace,we are really enjoying it.
Betty is buying present for her parents.she want to buy a beatiful present for her parents.Lingling is taking phonts with guide,She really happy.as for Daming, he is talking with miss Wang.I don't know what they talk,maybe they are talking about
the Summer Palace.……
The Summer Palace is really great.
I hope you can visit Summer Palace.
love,
Tony
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第1个回答  2012-12-30
My classmates and I are playing in the Summer Palace.There are many tourists here,Betty is busy buying presents for her parents.Lingling is taking photos with our tour guide.Daming is talking with Teacher Wang.What a fun day! we miss you very much.the Summer Palace has a long history,Hope you can visit Summer Palace .
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