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Question

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My Introduction
Hello! The boy who is cute and friendly is me. My name is Remon. I’m eleven. So some children call me “lemon”. I won’t be angry. I like to eat although it’s sour. I’m thin but I’m not short. I’m 155 centimeters tall. I don’t like playing sports. It makes me tired. And my favorite subject is English. I think English is exciting and interesting. The English teacher is funny. I like her class. In her class, I can learn some knowledge and have lots of fun. So I’m good at English. When my classmates can’t answer the questions, I can help them. My hobby is playing chess. I can play well. I’m a chess fan. I entered a chess competition last year. And I won a cup. Do you think I’m a larruping boy?

Answer 1

My Introduction
Hello! The boy who is cute and friendly is me. My name is Remon. I’m eleven. So some children call me “lemon”. But I won’t be angry. I like to eat them although they’re sour. I’m thin and tall. I don’t like playing sports. And my favorite subject is English. I think English is exciting and interesting. The English teacher is funny. I like her class. In her class, I can learn some knowledge and have lots of fun. So I’m good at English. I can help my classmates when they can’t answer the questions. My hobby is playing chess. I can play well. I’m a chess fan. I entered a chess competition last year. And I won a cup. Do you think I’m a larruping boy?

Answer 2

My Introduction
Hello! The boy who is cute and friendly is me. My name is Remon. I’m eleven. some children call me “lemon”,but I won’t be angry. And I like to eat them although it’s sour. I’m thin and tall . I don’t like playing sports,because it makes me tired. And my favorite subject is English. I think English is exciting and interesting. And The English teacher make the class funny. In her class, I can learn some knowledge and have lots of fun. So I’m good at English. I can help my classmates When they can’t answer the questions, . My hobby is playing chess,and I can play well. last year, I entered a chess competition ,and I won a cup. Do you think I’m a larruping boy?