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My Introduction
Hello! The boy who is cute and friendly is me. My name is Remon. I’m eleven. So some children call me “lemon”. I won’t be angry. I like to eat although it’s sour. I’m thin but I’m not short. I’m 155 centimeters tall. I don’t like playing sports. It makes me tired. And my favorite subject is English. I think English is exciting and interesting. The English teacher is funny. I like her class. In her class, I can learn some knowledge and have lots of fun. So I’m good at English. When my classmates can’t answer the questions, I can help them. My hobby is playing chess. I can play well. I’m a chess fan. I entered a chess competition last year. And I won a cup. Do you think I’m a larruping boy?