Last weekend l went to huangshan with my classmate.
A tourist area in huangshan, I the zheng big eyes search lotus feng. See it in the towering peaks in, still standing. Lotus feng is a perilous peaks of huangshan. Listen to father speak, it is 1860 meters, the towering and the summit of hazy, can be in the world.
We a began to climb the mountain. I took my father mother's hand, step by step up. To the mountainside, mother advised me to rest for a while I interest is strong, don't feel tired, or 1 vigorously social climbers. After three hours of hard work, we finally arrive lotus feng peak. The top of the hill there is a pavilion, people in the rest. I looked at under a pilgrimage, "day ah, this mountain is really high!" Standing at the top of the hill to huangshan marvelous views. The opposite mountain "immortal, the" finger to the front of the immortals, I follow its gestures see the moon, the moon looks like the curved of stone seems to be right next to the "heavenly" bite a cake of, lovely, and fun.
In lotus feng hotel on rest all night. The next day, we started down the mountain. Down the mountain is much more relaxed up the mountain, need not so difficult. I see while appreciation of the beauty of the road. The spring water flows through the gurgling away, that they verdant mountains. Go back to go below, reach a crystal-clear springs edge, I automatically stop. Holding up a WangQuanShui, wash a face and hand, quite comfortable. The morning sunlight through the gap, on the surface on markings similar shadow. Surrounding niaoyuhuaxiang, very comfortable. I breathe, the observers, as if they have embodied in the beautiful scenery.
Mom and dad push me until down the mountain, I just be reluctant to leave this worthy of the name in the world-huangshan.
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Last weekend l went to huangshan with my classmate .
l ate the food .lt was very delicious.
Down we go to see a welcoming pine and saw the song, this is one of Mount Huangshan famous scenic spots; we took more than two hours to get there. The song is really open arms, like in a warm welcome to our guests at Panasonic film together, give out loose photographed. At this time travel is going to end, I somewhat and unable to part from.（下山我们去看迎客松和送客松，这是黄山一个著名的景点；我们走了两个多小时才到了那里。迎客松真的是敞开怀抱，像在热烈欢迎我们我们在迎客松下合了影，给送客松拍了照。眼看这一次旅游就要结束了，我真有些恋恋不舍）
Mount Huangshan sea of clouds is wonderful, many peaks around in a big hole, cloud in a wide expanse of mist-covered waters ` change unpredictably, sometimes like the army go forward with great strength and vigour; sometimes like the roaring waves of the sea; sometimes like a gentle and lovely girl, while the billowing waves roar, while the peace and quiet, to leave a sense of amazement and joy.（黄山的云海更是奇妙，许多的山峰围成一个大洞，云在里面烟波浩渺`变幻莫测，时而像浩浩荡荡的军队；时而像波涛汹涌的大海；时而像温柔可爱的少女，一会儿翻腾怒吼，一会儿平平静静，给人留下莫名的惊愕与喜悦。）
Mount Huangshan hot springs in the Ziyun peak, hot springs are also popular natural bath. Usually 43degrees Celsius, winter 41degrees Celsius, take a shower with hot springs, can make the person God please alert, full of energy; with high spirit.（黄山的温泉在紫云峰下，温泉也是人们喜爱的天然浴池。平时43摄氏度，冬天41摄氏度，用温泉洗澡，可以使人神请气爽，精神百倍。）
Mount Huangshan is really wonderful. 黄山真是奇妙啊 l love it.
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