高中英语作文(高中生水平)

Question

       旅行的方式有两种，独自旅行或结伴旅行。请你以“Traveling alone or Traveling with friends,which do you prefer?”为话题，按照以下要点写一篇英语短文：1、独自旅行：自行安排，自由2、结伴旅行：互助，安全3、你的选择及理由注意：词数100~120，文章题目和开头以给出（不计字数）。                   Traveling alone or traveling with friends,which do you prefer?  There are basically two ways to travel.........

Answer 1

When traveling is involved, I find my thoughts upon how much taking a tour with my friends could amuse me, but I have never have it come true for merely once.
Compared with traveling alone, it may be freedom that some persons would perfectly enjoy, for which factor he can go anywhere at any time as long as he is willing to. In contrast, only if we go on a tour with one another can we have this chance to share the happiness along the journey whenever you have that feeling and at the same time, to travel with a friend couldn't be safer than traveling alone.
In accordance with the comparison above,( not only can traveling with friends can make sure I am safer, but it can also keep good company around me.
To make a sound conclusion, )I would have the preference to traveling with my friends.
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Answer 2

When traveling is involved, I find my thoughts upon how much taking a tour with my friends could amuse me, but I have never have it come true for merely once.
Compared with traveling alone, it may be freedom that some persons would perfectly enjoy, for which factor he can go anywhere at any time as long as he is willing to. In contrast, only if we go on a tour with one another can we have this chance to share the happiness along the journey whenever you have that feeling and at the same time, to travel with a friend couldn't be safer than traveling alone.
In accordance with the comparison above,( not only can traveling with friends can make sure I am safer, but it can also keep good company around me.
To make a sound conclusion, )I would have the preference to traveling with my frien本回答被网友采纳