The Internet makes the world smaller.英语作文。求思路就行。自

The Internet makes the world smaller.英语作文。求思路就行。自己写的批改网说文章内敛性不够好。

本文属于传统议论文,按照常规行文思路就可以。
第一段开头,概括自己的观点:为什么互联网使得世界变小。
第二段阐述第一个理由,第三段阐述第二个理由。
最后结尾,总结全文
本题为互联网使世界变得更小,也就是互联网的出现改变了人们的生活方式,使人与人之间的沟通更方便和紧密,信息比较通畅。
其次通过互联网人们也可以实现资源共享,可以在互联网上查询各种自己需要的信息,所以人与人之间的交流不再困难,互联网使世界连在了一起。
下面是范文,可以参考:
It goes without saying that the Internet is one of the greatest inventions of the twentieth century. It could be seen as a fastest communication medium in the world. Thus, some people believe that the Internet can make the world smaller by reducing communication gaps among us. To some extent, I agree with this statement because some drawbacks of the Internet can easily be overcome by its advantages in term of communication.

First of all, to businesses, the Internet has given business people many more chances to manage relationships with their customers and clients quicker and more effectively. In fact, online conferences and chat services implemented on the Internet have lead to an increase in opportunities for person-to-person communication anytime, anywhere. Most these programs are quite cheaper than the cost of travelling long distances to meet and talk directly. Simply, workers just stay at home in front of their computer screens and communicate via the Internet. There are a number of global companies that use the Internet to improve relationships between countries over the world such as Asia, America, Europe, and Africa: Apple, Microsoft, and Coca Cola, for example. Clearly, cyberspace is an ideal environment for communication on our planet, regardless of geographic distances.

Furthermore, the Internet allows people from remote areas to connect with each other and share mutual interests. Some would argue that the Internet makes us more isolated. This truth is, however, that the Internet provides users with a way to communicate across vast distances. People can easily connect with their friends and family who live far away by using e-mail, Skype, and social networks. Let us take the website Facebook as a typical example. This website allows people stay in touch with their family and friends and helps people make new friends around the world. In this way, the Internet brings people close together indeed.

To sum up, the facts display the importance of the Internet. It has almost terminated the most difficult era of communication. The Internet creates a live communication environment for people who live far from their families, as well as business people, so they can form relationships with their partners over the world. Yes, the world is suddenly smaller with the Internet.
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第1个回答  2015-03-11
With the rapid development of the secience and technology nowadays,the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.
To start with,the Internet makes it easier for people to communicate with each other.In the past ,it usually tooks people several days and even months to get contacted with someone,while today we can make it just by writing an E-mail and click the keyboard,then we will send what we want to said to a person wherever he(she) is in the world in one or two seconds.Moreover,people can talk with each other face to face on the Internet regardless of the distance.
Then,the Internet enables us to get a large amount of information.Nerver have we grasped so much information as it is today.With the information,work and study can be very convenient.
In conclusion,the Internet is making our world smaller and smaller,just like a “global village”.
掌握要点:internet使得人们同外界联系越来越方便。本回答被网友采纳
第2个回答  2015-03-11
你好,本题为互联网使世界变得更小,也就是互联网的出现改变了人们的生活方式,使人与人之间的沟通更方便和紧密,信息比较通畅
其次通过互联网人们也可以实现资源共享,可以在互联网上查询各种自己需要的信息,所以人与人之间的交流不再困难,互联网使世界连在了一起,就从这些角度考虑就可以了(^_^)追问

可以帮我完善一下吗…拜托了

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亲,你截得屏太大,我在手机上看不清呦

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那我怎么发给你??

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屏幕截小一点我试试看,不好意思哦,因为我现在正在上课所以没办法帮你,不知道你急不急,只能晚上帮你完善⊙﹏⊙

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发给你了。好的,拜托了!!

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改错网说的内敛性不好,意思是,中心不够明确,我看了你的文章,似乎全文都在描述的人们的沟通信息便捷了,应该从多角度考虑,下面是一些观点,你看一下,仅作参考

With the arrival of the knowledge economy age, Internet, as a new media, has come into our life. Nowadays, getting on line and surfing the Internet for information has become popular in China, especially among college students and teachers. Why is Internet getting so popular in such a short time?

The popularity of Internet results from its great convenience and easy accessibility to information. Thanks to the Internet, a world of information is just a click away. E-mail is another contributing factor to its popularity. It can transmit your letter quickly, safely and accurately. Besides, Internet has some other uses. Doctors may use it to diagnose and treat their patients by discussing or exchanging experiences with doctors in other parts of the world. Students may obtain new knowledge from a national long-distance educational system via Internet. Finally, businessman can conduct E-commerce or E-business on the net.

With so many uses and advantages, there is no doubt more and more people will be wired to the Internet-the information expressway. In short, with its high speed and efficiency, Internet will be more popular in China in the near future.

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这是你自己写的吗…

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不是,只是给你提供几个观点

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第3个回答  2015-03-11
1、导致世界变小的原因
2、这样带来的影响:好坏两方面
3、你的看法:这样好还是不好
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