求助，一篇英语作文，李华王林的实验，蜡烛的那种。急！！

Question

英语作文：假如你是李华，今天是星期天，你和王林在家里做了老师讲过的一个实验——将蜡烛放在装了水的盘子里，点燃一会儿后，上面盖上一个玻璃杯，蜡烛熄灭后，杯中的水面会上升，请你将实验过程记录下来。用英语哦，初二水平，嘿嘿，谢啦

Answer 1

1,例文 ：Hi,I am li Hua.On sunday's morning,after I haveing breakfast,I remembered the homework which was assigned by my physics teacher.So I quicklly start to concentrate on the homework.The homework is a small experiment.To my surprise ,my friend Wang Lin came when I was doing the experiment.So we start to do it together.
Frist,we put a candle on a piate full of water.
Second,we set fire to the candle and it burned for a while.
Third,we use a glass to cover the candle which was burning.
Finally,we observed that the water in the glass was rising when the candle went off.
We fast recorded the while process.Then,we make a coincident conclusion!
How happy a sunday!
2，方法技巧：首先把行文过程思考好，尽量多添加细节，特别是自己日常生活的细节，如心情，作息习惯，动作表情，事情的起因，经过，结果，影响。。。从而使内容充实！
3，心得：根据我多年的写作经验，积累了一些写作技巧和你交流，仅作参考！我总结出，作文尽量要写长一点,虽然有的老师说作文写的太长，会扣分，但是长作文的起始分大多数都是高分，即20分以上，（当然除了抄写前面的阅读理解！）就算再扣也是扣1,2分，还是高分！如果平时练的时候就写短的，那考试时就更写不出长的！况且，短作文只有写的简练整洁才有可能得高分，但高分一般很少，大多数都在18分以下，所以长作文再扣分也是高分，有相对的优势！

Answer 2

Hello,this is Li Hua.In sunday morning,Wang Lin and I made a experiment about the atmosphere peressure,and here is the course.
1.Prepare three things:a candle,a plate filled with water and a glass so we can see what happens from the outside of it .
2.Put the candle in the plate and light it.
3.After a while, put the glass in the plate,make sure the candle is in the glass and the top of the glass is surrounded by the water.
4.Wait for a second,we can see the fire goes out and the water level in the plate goes up.
So , This is the result.We can learn the atmosphere peressure is everywhere arround us,and it is bigger than we thought,is it?本回答被网友采纳

Answer 3

I'm Li hua, today is Sunday, I feel a little boring，So I with Wang Lin at home had the teacher talked about an experiment .First,we put candles in the water dish and top cover with a glass candle has gone out. Then ignited after a short, After some timg thecup of water will rise.How interesting the experiment is!