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假如你是李华,上周日和同学一起去东山游玩。请根据以下信息,给你的笔友Tom写一封介绍此经历,并邀请Tom来游玩。
内容提要:1、去山东,乘车3小时到山脚。
2、爬上,中途要钻过一个山洞,抓铁索通过。
3、手滑下跌,朋友帮忙爬出山洞。
4、惊险刺激。
注意:1、词数100左右。
2、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Tom
I'm writing to share with you my experience in Dongshan Mountain last Sunday.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

第1个回答  2012-04-14
Dear Tom
I'm writing to share with you my experience in Dongshan Mountain last Sunday. We got up early and took a three hours' ride to get to the foot of the mountain. On arriving there we could not wait to climb it . There is a cave in the middle of the mountain so we had to go through it by an iron chain. Then suddenly my hands were slippery so I nearly fall off it .It was my friends who helped me out of the cave at that moment. It is so dangerous but excited that I will never forget this trip. I hope someday I will take you there when you are free. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua追问

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