英语改错，急求！！！

Li Hua was my friend. We got well with each other. Every summer she invites me to go swimming although she couldn't get in the water most of the time unless she was weak. She always listened careful to me when i was sad. She was always there for me when i had problem in my life or my study. Last summer anything changed. Li Hua was told by her doctor that she had cancer. Two months after she died. Heard the news, i was heartbroken. It has been a year since her death, and i still dream about her. I konw there will always to be a place in my heart for her !
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第一行 got well 改为 got on well
第一行 invites 改为 invited
第二行 the water 改为 water （去掉the）
第二行 unless改为as或则because
第三行 careful改为carefully
第四行 anything 改为everything
第五行 after 改为 later
第五行 Heard 改为 Hearing
第五行 and 改为 but
第五行 to be a place 改为 be a place（去掉to）

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第1个回答 2012-10-04

Li Hua was my friend.We got on well with each other.Every summer she would invite me to go swimming although she couldn't get into the water.She was weak most of the time.She always listened carefully to me when I was sad.She was always there for me when I had problems in my life or my study.Last summer everything was changed.Li Hua was told by her doctor that she had cancer.Two months later,she died.Hearing the news,I was heartbroken.It is a year since she died, and I still dream of her.I know there will always be a place in my heart for her!

第2个回答 2012-10-04

Li Hua was my friend. We got(on) well with each other. Every summer she invites me to go swimming although she couldn't get in the water most of the time unless(unless-because) she was weak. She always listened careful(careful-carefully) to me when i was sad. She was always there for me when i had problem in my life or my study. Last summer anything(anything--everything) changed. Li Hua was told by her doctor that she had cancer. Two months after(after--later) she died. Heard(Hearing) the news, i was heartbroken. It has been a year since her death, and i still dream about her. I konw there will always to be a place in my heart for her !

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