400分求篇高考英语范文

马上就要高考了,我是山东的,从去年看来,英语书面表达是关于教育方面的。
今年不一定是,但是我还是有压一下,自己的书面表达不怎么样,也就20分左右,我想了几个关于教育方面比较热的话题,想请你们给几篇
一是关于“平行志愿”的反对或赞成一篇
二是关于“山东给学生减负”(相关报道http://www.sdedu.gov.cn/
就这两个了。
(说明一下,由于我是高中省,词汇还是请控制在大学4级(包含)以下吧)
难道一个例文都没有吗?

08高考英语作文预测(范文)

书面表达(满分25分)
假设你是刘英。最近你就流行节目“超级女生”(Super Grls)或“快乐男生”(Happy
Boys)收集了同学们的不同看法。请根据下表内容给征稿的某英语报刊编辑写封信,并谈谈你自己的观点。
一些同学的看法

另一些同学的看法

有助于发现自己的优缺点

能挑战自我并丰富生活经历

易误导年轻人

会带来一些问题,如学习受到影响

注意:1.词数100个左右,信的开头和落款已为你写好(不计人总词数);

2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯;

3.参考词汇:
误导——mislead
挑战——challenge

Dear Editor,

Yours,
Liu Ying
Dear Editor,
Recently, I've collected some different opinions from my classmates about the program Super Girls or Happy Boys.
Some of them argue that it offers a good chance for young people to discover their own strong points as well as weaknesses. Meanwhile, it can get them ready for any challenges and enrich their life experiences. However, st)me of my classmates don't think so. They feel that it could mislead those youngsters. Especially to the school girls and boys, it may cause some troubles. For example, it may affect their study badly.
In my opinion, every coin has two sides. So long as we have a correct attitude and good self-control, it's still OK to join in it.

Yours,
Liu Ying

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08高考英语作文预测题一

根据漫画,请以“烟”为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述下面的内容,并就此发表你的评论。

要求:1.文章必须包括描述和评论两部分;根据内容适当发挥,注意行文连贯。

2.词数:100词左右。

【预测依据】

看图类写作是高考写作的热点之一,具有一定的难度。内容上多为中学生日常生活中熟悉的经历,社会热点,具有一定的交流性、应用性、时代性、教育性。

【写作指导】

1.要审清写作要求。

2.此题只提供了一幅相关的图画信息。通过观察及写作要求,我们可以确定:(1)体裁:夹叙夹议;(2)人称:须用第三人称;(3)时态:可用一般现在时。

3.审清图画的主题和梗概:一个年轻人在工厂,嘴里正吸着烟,这时他看到工厂里的一个禁止吸烟的标志牌,而工厂本身也正向大气中排放滚滚浓烟。年轻人顿时觉得困惑不解……由此,作者发表评论:相关部门应当采取措施禁止工厂污染自然环境的行为!

4.增加细节,连贯成文,做到层次分明,结构严谨,并准确选用相关词语、句型表达图画内容。

【08高考英语作文预测参考范文】

Smoke

This is a funny and instructive picture. In the picture, a young man is smoking happily in a factory when he sees a sign which means “No smoking” on the wall. But he finds that the factory is giving off large quantities of heavy smoke which makes him feel very puzzled, “Why does the factory forbid people to smoke while the factory itself emits so much poisonous smoke?”

Nowadays, many factories know the danger of smoking to themselves and don’t allow people smoking in the factory. However, they don’t pay any attention to the danger that they cause to the whole society. And they let out lots of polluted smoke which does great harm to our environment.

In my opinion, we could live without most of the industrial products, but we could not survive without nature! Therefore, something must be done to prevent the pollution caused by all factories!

【范文点评】

本文首先对图片内容进行了简短的介绍,接着发表了作者的简短评论。文章结构严谨,审题准确,语言流畅,过渡自然。文章的得分亮点也较多。如最后一段,一句“In my opinion, we could live without most of industrial products, but we could not survive without nature.”,便不入俗套地点明了要采取相关措施的原因!可谓一语惊人,令人深思!
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2008高考英语作文预测 预测二

下表是你根据平时了解所得到的中国高三学生选择高考志愿的信息。请你根据该表用英语写一篇简要介绍,向编辑部反映该情况。

注意:

1.文章的开头已为你写好。

2.词数:100词左右。

Chinese senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities.

【预测依据】

在高考中,图表类写作经常出现。其内容上多为中学生日常生活中熟悉的生活经历,以及社会热点。高考志愿填报问题,是考生、家长、社会等非常关注的一个热门话题,对于该话题的报导以及争论是人们经常耳闻目睹的。

【解题指导】

本文从体裁上看属于议论文,其命题方式属于图表类。图表类作文多以说明文和议论文为主,要求考生根据所给的图表、数据及标题进行分析、研究,阅读其中的文字和说明,弄清各种信息之间的关系,提炼和确定出文章的中心思想。然后进行分析、概括和归纳。

注意:(1)图表和数据内容不一定要全部描述。(2)善于抓住总的规律,趋势,归纳增减率。(3)时态:特定时间用过去时。经常出现的情况或自己的评述用一般现在时。(4)要适当运用一些高级词汇并灵活使用图表类写作常用的经典好句型。

【2008高考英语作文预测 参考范文】

Chinese senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities.

A survey has been done to study it. We can see from the table that about 35% of the students believe the choice should be based on their own interest. They say interest is the mother of success. Besides, it is a miserable thing to have to spend most of your time studying what you have no interest in.

Morestudents (around45%), however, insist that main consideration should be given to the needs of the society, for, they argue, not everyone can find the job they like best. What’s more, interest can be born and lost.

Interestingly, there are about 20% who find it too difficult to make a choice and would rather depend on their parents or teachers to make a decision.

【范文点评】

该篇文章从总体上来讲,能够把握议论文的特点。语言流畅,能够正确地利用一些较为高级的词语以及一些精彩短语、句型(文中黑体字)。人称使用正确,为第三人称。能够把握主体时态:用一般现在时。因为是经常出现的情况。能够按题目的要求,涵盖所要求的内容,并适当增添了一些相关内容,较好地完成了写作任务,达到了预定的写作目的。
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第1个回答  2008-03-15
首先不能出现低级的语法错误,一篇英语作文要有几个亮点。如几个高级单词,短语。如人家用sometimes,你用off and on.你必须会用衔接词如then, after, meanwhile, at the same time .为了使语言丰富,可以用同义词如write,compose,put down/pleasure,delight,hapiness,enjoyment.会用一些从句如定语从句(The man who does not come to the Great Wall is not a true man.不到长城非好汉!),强调句(It is in 2008 year when I was admitted by Yale university.) 同位语从句(when I heard the news that I was admitted by Yale university,I was great happy.)等等。英语单词必须写的工整,这一点非常重要。有些单词不会翻译,你可以间接翻译。现在的高中单词好多是CET-4(四级)的单词,你还必须会用句型如It takes sb some time to do sth.想增加你的水平你可以用虚拟语气,独立主格结构。你最好把语法学好,到大学不再有新的语法了。不会再讲语法。现在的英语非常重要,到大学你必须过CET-4,而且最好考高分,因为现在发分数条。不啰嗦了。At last I want give my best whises to you.I believe you can go to the university that you want to.本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答  2008-03-21
我也刚经历过高考,知道材料的选取,就给你推荐这么几篇喽:

There are many advantages to riding a bicycle. First, using a bicycle can greatly help reduce the air pollution in many big cities. Second, people can improve their health by riding a bicycle.

The future of bicycle will be bright. In some European countries, city governments have arranged pedestrians to use “public bicycles” to travel round the city center free of charge

1、你是张浩,一位办公室职员。有时感到乏味,很容易疲倦。你想加入一个俱乐部,改变一下这种状况,以便闲暇时间过的更快活。写了一封信给俱乐部经理介绍你的嗜好和兴趣。

Dear Club Manager:

I am writing to ask to join your club to enjoy my free time.

I am a clerk. I often feel tense and become tired easily. Perhaps, I need to relax myself a bit. I hope to become a member of your club. I have many hobbies and interests. For example, I like photography, calligraphy and painting, dancing and singing. And I like going fishing, collecting stamps and raising flowers. Besides, I am good at playing Chinese chess and cards. Please write back and tell me if there are some formalities that I will have to go through.

Thank you very much in advance.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

ZhangHao

2、你是王萍,写一封信给Jefferson先生。信件的内容包括:

1、 一个月前,他邀请了你到他家过圣诞节。

2、你在他那里受到了热情款待。

3、信件末尾写上一句你认为必要的话。

January 22,2005

Dear Mr. Jefferson:

I am writing to thank you for your kindness and hospitality I enjoyed during my stay in your place.

It is very kind of you to invite me to spend my Christmas holiday in your palace last month. The room you arranged for me in your house was quiet, clean and comfortable. The food was very delicious. And visits to local scenic spots were really wonderful. They have not only broadened my horizon, but also enriched my experience. By the way, if it is convenient for you, please come over and spend your Spring Festival this year in my place.

Thank you very much again.

Yours,
Wang Ping

3、你的朋友Glad要从另一个城市来看你。你将到机场去接他。但出于某种原因,你不能去了,写封信给他,解释原因,并告诉他如何到你家。

May 18,2004

Dear Glad,

I am writing to say that I will not be able to meet you at the airport next Monday morning.

This morning my boss asked me to go to Shanghai on business tomorrow. It is something very important for our company and I will have to go. By the way, I will be back within 10 days. When you arrive, please take Bus No.345 and get off at the East Bus Station. The station is not far from my house and you will find my house easily. My mother is always at home. I told my mother that you would come already.
Looking forward to seeing you.

Yours,

Li Ming

4、你是高明,不能在下周一下午四点与李青女士想见。写一封信给她,内容应包括:

1. 向她表示歉意;

2. 解释你的原因;
3. 提出把约会时间推后三天;

4. 写上一句你认为有必要写的话

January 2, 2005

Dear Li Qing:

I am writing to say I’m sorry that I will not be able to go for the appointment at 4:00 p.m. on Monday next week.

This morning I got an urgent phone call from my boss in Guangzhou, and he asked me to flight there at once to join him in an important business negotiation. The Negotiation has something to do with the future of our company. I will have to stay there for about a week. I hope to postpone the appointment for three days till Thursday next week. Phone me and let me know if it is O.K. to you. My apologies again.
Looking forward to seeing you.

Your friend

Gao Ming
第3个回答  2008-03-17
I don't know how to answer you, but pls allow me to give you some advices, first you must not put your future on the guess which topic to be hold, cuz there are so many things can be test, everything is suspect. and you should read some books and write somethins, just like me, the more you've written when you are in the exam the eaiser you'll be thinking. best wishes.
第4个回答  2008-03-14
http://itn8.com/paper/151/154/index.html里有全国各地高考作文题目。还有http://itn8.com/article/68/193/index.html里的 《2007年广东高考英语任务型写作解题指导》文章中有的。
参考资料:http://www.itn8.com/
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